Into Thin Air - Comments

This is very cute. They're relationship is so tangible and believable and not to mention sweet! The characterization in this story is just fantastic. Hopefully you'll keep updating, I think this has potential!

IT is sooooo cute!! :D I absolutely love their characters! They are so realistic!

Now those guys from earlier, you got the creepy part down to a science. I was quivering in my computer chair at home! D:

Anyways, I love this story and definitly will be subscribing!!

I love how realistic their relationship is, how they just tease each other and bicker and then curl up and watch a movie and everything. It's really cute and believable. The story is well written, too, it flows from one scene to the other in a really easy way and makes it lovely to read. I did notice a few simple errors in the grammar here and there, but nothing overly distracting. This looks like a promising story, keep it up!

Keep writing plzzz I love this story already even though its on the 1 st chapter

I want more of this! It's awesome! :)

Yeee ! I am scared because I the summary but I really love them together !! Please update soon !! I am not sure I can wait ! ♥

Update sooon! Great chapter!!

Great first chapter! I think it's cutethat they are living together now. Update soon!

awhhhhhhhhhhhh

Everything is perfect
You are the best!!
Update soon

Oh goodness, you were right, I did get that heart crushing feeling for a moment. I like the name of this book a lot better. Update soon, yeah? Can't wait to see what happens.

I can't wait for it to start!