I love this story. It makes my life. I'm glad that Jacob knows now... but Constance quit fighting it!! Oi... that's just me being me... sorry. But YAY! I was super happy when I saw the update :)
When I saw that winky face in the comment I was like, "She' going to update today!" And I got all excited and waited to see the update on my updates page XD here's a meme for that. Okay, so I was reading the part where Jacob walked in on Constance, and when she was scrubbing her tail dry, my grandma walked in on me and I don't know why, but I kind of closed my laptop because for some odd reason or another, I thought I had to make sure she didn't know Constance was about to be naked in the story. I don't know why I'm telling you this, but I just thought it was funny. Meme Meme Meme
I love this story. It's one of my favorites on Mibba! Off topically, my computer wants to turn Mibba into minibar. lmao. Back on topic, I love Constance. I hope she soon gives into Jake. And you aren't horrible at writing! You're wonderful!!!!! Congrats on the job, too bad you don't like it. I think, even though you don't like it, you're sticking with it for money. That's a great quality in a person. I can't wait for the next chapter! Especially if you say we're going to enjoy it.
I can say that it was a beautiful chapter. I don't think I could pull away from that hunk of man... but that's just me. Good luck with your job. I hope you get enough money right soon so you can get out of there really quick. Uhm... yeah Can't wait to read more!!
I feel, as if you are trying to kill me. Just when everything is starting to happen between them she pulls away and it makes me wanna rip my hair out. I'm just like asdfghjkl how does she even say no? If it was me I couldn't. I would be all up on that boy and be like yo, dude. I'm a mermaid did you see me in the water yeah thought so okay let's have babies together. You work at McDonalds? It must suck but in all honesty think of how many people love you for doing what you are doing. Well okay update soon because you teased me with saying you know the next chapter will be awesome to read and stuff. So yeah.
I must say I applaud Constance for being able to pull away and not kiss Jacob...don't think I'd have the will-power to do so myself, aha. I loved the update and can't wait to read more!! As for you now working at McDonald's: they must suck at training nationwide or something because my friend used to work there and recently quit actually and she said the same about the training. She hardly ever got any hours like two and if she asked for more they would give her three so she'd have a whopping three hours of work per week...
So I just happened upon this story today and let me just tell you I love it. The plot is definitely unique and it stands out and the story itself is extremely well-written! I'll definitely be subscribing and checking out your other stories :)
:O I LOVE THIS ! why have you not posted more ? D: I love Constance, she's so sweet & innocent :3 Jacob needs to try to get to know her better ! Gaaaaaahufjhds,fjadskjn ! I can't wait for the next update <3
Lmao! XD I loved it. (: Ahaha, especially how Seth had already left them to eat his precious hot dog. BAHAHAHAHA! I'm also pretty happy that Emily smacked Paul. Justice. (; So I was reading and then was laughing at this and then when Constance was like "Thank you" I was like Hmmm... And then I read your author's note and was like.
So when I saw your comment I was like but then I thought...
Nice Nice! I really enjoy the story line... although I wish she wouldn't be fighting herself about her feelings... but... all in all... A great story that I enjoy very much