I was totally laughing over Paul! You portrayed him very nicely. Hmmm... maybe I should make a meme for this one. I'll make two. Lol Here's a somewhat funny one and here's one showing how I feel about Paul. Here's how I was when I saw your comment. Here's how I was as I started to read. And here's how I was at the end. (:
Awww, cute! :D Lol I love how you described Sam and Emily. It was adorable. (: And I loved Jacob's POV at the end. Here's what I have to say to Constance, though. And Here's... What I have to say about the Author's note. (; Lmao
Love this!! Jacob is amazing. You always come up with great ideas for stories!! :) and I hope your feeling better. :) And I'm going to sent you something about an upcoming story that I'm planning on writing. Hopefully you can help me with some ideas? :) Love thsi and you of course!!
Whoot whoot! We're getting somewhere! (; Lmao when I saw you updated I was like this. For reals. Ahaha! I loved it and liked how you didn't make Jacob the one to babysit her, although part of me wishes you did, but this makes it more interesting I think. (: Can't wait for the next one!
People are complaining? They has got to be crazy! The only thing I can think right now is... YAY! You updated! I'm so happy Jacob and Constance met! I love Seth, I really have to agree, he's so cute!! :) This is an amazing story! I love the dialogue, the way you're writing your characters and the amazing story line. I'm just afraid that her merman guards are going to come through the door any moment and take her back home! D: Anyways, love the story! Please please please update soon. :D
asdfghjkl. How are people complaining about your writing? It's wonderful! I think the length is great but if you wanna make 'em longer then I wouldn't complain. I mean honestly I wouldn't. Soo, I can't believe that after everything she finally saw him and he saw her again and the whole pack saw her! It was great. Seth standing up to Sam was just so 'aw' worthy. Update soon? Because it's hard going without this story in my life. :'( So. Hard! lol I hope your mouth surgery goes well. What are you getting done?
Wow. That's all I have to say! Ash, you're an amazing writer and these chapters are perfect length. People are being stupid. Haha. There's a lot of GREAT things in these short chapters, so shut up people. These chapters are wonderful. :) leave her alone about the shortness of them. :)
Anyways. She saw him!! I am so happy about that!! Like, I'm really happy. Seth is cute in the last chapter. LOL Paul. He's funny. Bahaha. And Jake is too cute. :) I love this and you don't need to be sorry for letting us wait. Because they're well worth the wait!!
Update soon please?
PS. I'm sorry about your mouth surgery. That stinks!! ):
Yay! An update! Sorry it took so long to read and comment, but I was a little busy this past week. (: I have to say, when I read that last sentence I squealed into my pillow and hated you because there was no ninth chapter. Lol So with that said, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :3