Confused by the 'Rian' commenta...did I read something than everyone else? I read about Ace...hmm...anyway I'm loving this story so far :) its cute that alex admitted that he likes ace. Update soon pleeeeeease :)
I really like the way that they get together. It's really cute and descriptive and I really liked the way you explained it. I feel like it's very realistic and not too over the top, which is a pretty fine line, so well done with that! And you do a pretty good job of making me feel what your characters feel. It makes the whole thing come to life in a way, if that even makes sense.