A very interesting story so far! I like the description and how it’s heading. I can’t wait to see where it all goes, character interactions are great - and you are a very detailed writer. The emotions between them are intense as well. Keep up the great writing, I can’t wait to see where it heads!
Me drinking Tazo Organic iced green tea, singing Can You Feel The Love Tonight from The Lion King, swaying side to side... and reading. That's how cool I am. XD
I am trying to read, and keep getting distracted by the comments... which are now on the side of the story page... grrr.... *must continue reading* Actually, I have to go back and read from the beginning, just because I already forgot what was going on. lol.