Plastic Bones - Comments

YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS IS SOOOOO GOOD!!!! i love it

i love this story already ok, already starting to feel attached to the characters, i cant wait to see what happens, things are looking to be very interesting x

This is a really interesting story. There are a few grammar mistakes that bothered me though. Mainly, it should be "could have" instead of "could of." But, other than that, I like it. I'd like to see where you end up going with it.