Homepage › Stories › Plastic Bones › Comments

Plastic Bones - Comments

  • ryan.berch

    ryan.berch (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    26
    Location:
    United States
    YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS IS SOOOOO GOOD!!!! i love it
    December 31st, 2012 at 07:48pm
  • Livi12396

    Livi12396 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    i love this story already ok, already starting to feel attached to the characters, i cant wait to see what happens, things are looking to be very interesting x
    September 9th, 2012 at 11:18am
  • antiwords

    antiwords (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    This is a really interesting story. There are a few grammar mistakes that bothered me though. Mainly, it should be "could have" instead of "could of." But, other than that, I like it. I'd like to see where you end up going with it.
    July 16th, 2012 at 05:21am
Homepage › Stories › Plastic Bones › Comments