Double Trouble - Comments

You guys should keep updating!!! It's really good :)

So excited for a new chapter can't wait for mote

Who are these twins? Obviously I read read enough about them cause I don't know them. MEANING UPDATE NORE OFTEN. Or I'm calling FW canon :P

great new chapter!! please update soon!!!

Obviously you guys don't update enough cause I can't wrap my head around the twins and Taner. :P

I don't think I have commented on this story yet! Wow. BTW- I love to post long comments. So here we go (:

Well, I read all of these 37 beautiful chapters in a few days, and I must admit I read them when I wasn't supposed to (like in the middle of most of my classes tee hee). It's so addicting. I love love love how you put Avery in the NHL and how Alina will take the offer. It is just that this might be the only story on this site with this kind of plot. Not to mention twin sisters in the NHL now.

Gosh. There are so many moments in this story that would be so fun to live. All the dinners and the food (especially that ice cream cake OMG I want some so bad!!!) and boys barging into your house. The pre-game rituals are so cute and funny and the relationship that Alina and Avery have is what all siblings should have <3

The Addison men seem so sweet and charming and... sexy ;) hehe. One's a model for god's sake. Tell me that's easy to resist. Lol you can't.

I feel bad that Kaner and Jon have been put on the spot so many times. And that Lina and Ave talk like nobody's around. WWSABD and Immaturity and ADHD at its finest had me laughing my tush off. Gosh. It's too funny!

I cant believe almost the whole Penguins club came for dinner and then slept on the couches. haahah. Then the pranks lolololol. That was hilarious!!!!!! There's too much about this that I love and too much to comment on because I haven't been her since the beginning. But no worries, I am here now and will be here till the end! I am one of your babies now!

Please let Avery heal all safe and sound <3 Ok so anyway... I have one thing that I think you improve on and I hope you don't mind a little constructive criticism. I would definitely try to add some more descriptive details. I'm not sure about other readers, but I am having a hard time visualizing a lot of stuff in this. I can easily make it up the way I want to see it in my mind, but it is your story and you should make it look the way you want it to, on paper and in your mind as well as the readers'.

Other than that, you have yourselves a marvelous story. Definitely keep working hard on it! It's amazing

Lilah, the events don't count as real like if they happened in your dreams. BBUUUT I'm pretty sure you're referring to the happy pills. Oh those happy pills.

*snorts* right busy.
O.o interesting this chapter.

Well dang how could Tazer just walk away. Very interesting, hope she plays now!

Perfect update. Hope she is ok.

Why is everyone yelling? Damn.

I missed this story love the new chapter

Great up date. I hope as can still play. I love the beat down on the ice!

I cannot take this seriously anymore. So many things wrong here. Mah OTPs! Dx noo this isn't right!!

Dx lilah you have school already?! What is this nonsense?! And Ooo pranks! I'm excited!

Great update! Wonderful writing style

wonderful update. I want to know what happened

jaljd;sljflksdajf;ljkasdlkfj;alsdjf;lsdkjflakjfl;aksjfd WHAT HAPPENED!!!!!

Great update! Why is he callling her, it does not seem like its going to turn out good!

LOVE THE NEW CHAPTER!