Sweet Touch of Poison - Comments

  • Frankie Ro.

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    I love Mikey, sigh. And the new layout is off the hook.
    April 1st, 2012 at 07:17pm
  • Irbisfreak

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    OMFG Ilove memes! :D forever alone is my absolute favourite C: have you seen this thing when someone is speaking about his life, like he says "I have 1 million on my bank account, girlfriend and a plenty of lovers, I don't work, I live in a mansion, everyone loves me" or something like this and lower is a "The Sims 3" logo and forever alone XD it always make me laugh XD "if you know what I mean" i great too and "me gusta" and... Yeah, memes are awesome C:
    anyway, Mikey is smart and he gets virtual cookies from me C: maybe he'll be able to help a bit C:
    April 1st, 2012 at 02:12pm
  • VenomCybertron-_-

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    Brehahaa!
    Mikey and Gerard has some ceral Bromance xD
    March 31st, 2012 at 10:58pm
  • Irbisfreak

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    It was cool C: your style is more descriptive and I like it C:
    March 30th, 2012 at 07:55am
  • Miss Tiffany Blews

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    I honestly would, but I am do busy that I'm afraid to take on more work. I could try if you're okay with me taking a bit of time to update.
    March 27th, 2012 at 03:29am
  • VenomCybertron-_-

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    If no one else has asked to become the Co-author, if you accpect me, i wouldnt mind being your Co author
    March 27th, 2012 at 02:46am
  • Irbisfreak

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    LOL it's sweet that Frankie cares so much about Gee C: and Gee has a nice hiding place XD
    March 23rd, 2012 at 05:50am
  • VenomCybertron-_-

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    Noohoo! *Sheds tear of Sadness*,
    Your seeing BVB? Im seeing Escape the fate. What now bitch! XD i hope you have fun!!:p
    March 23rd, 2012 at 12:30am
  • Miss Tiffany Blews

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    Oh Gerd ;~;
    March 22nd, 2012 at 11:42pm
  • BlackStainedMirrors

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    You didn't have to delete the last 2 chapters you just could have just changed a few things, But I'm happy that you're trying to rewrite 2 whole chapters which is awesome 'cause I'd never do that, it's too hard for me hehehe
    Love it, hope you update soon!

    ~Pansy Xo
    March 21st, 2012 at 01:19am
  • VenomCybertron-_-

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    I think it was fine! You coukd have been all "Bitch Pleass! How could we be a couple when we cant even touch each Other... Way Would DIEEEE" I was about.to.tell.you thay butttah, You deleted the chapters.Before.i could.tell.you!!! They.could meet Then two in.....Study hall watching them make.out and Gerard Enjoyed it *Wink Wink Nudge Nudge!*

    Ps- Sorry for speling errors..My phones shit
    March 21st, 2012 at 12:39am
  • Miss Tiffany Blews

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    You repeated a paragraph twice near the end.
    And Brendon or Ryan could be a cousin to Dom. I don't know, I'm making up shit.
    March 20th, 2012 at 11:57pm
  • Irbisfreak

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    -.- okayyyyy, fine with me, though I don't really think it turned out badly - the therapy thing I mean C: maybe some things needed re-writing though, so go for it girl! :D
    March 20th, 2012 at 10:11pm
  • BlackStainedMirrors

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    Love this.
    There relationship was too fast but..still.
    I don't think they're allowed to kick them out of school, legally, like elmoisemo6
    said.

    ~Pansy Xo
    March 19th, 2012 at 11:10pm
  • Miss Tiffany Blews

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    Isn't*
    March 19th, 2012 at 04:11am
  • Miss Tiffany Blews

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    Ryan Ross?
    And the thing is, they can't legally make them do that. That would actually be against the law 'cause homosexuality it's against the law and it suppresses their freedom of speech. And you have some fragment and run on sentences. But I'm loving it do far even though their relationship went a bit too fast.
    March 19th, 2012 at 04:10am
  • Irbisfreak

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    Fuuuuuuuck, that teacher reminds me of a priest that teaches in my school -.- they could so totally get married LOL -.- I think it's her son...? :D idk C: and how fucking dares she! Gay PDA <3 Frerard PDA <3 <3 <3 gdusvzysvzygs I wonder why Gee's immune to the poison, in Frank's place I wouldn't be able to resist, I'd kill the bitch :/
    March 18th, 2012 at 11:09pm
  • VenomCybertron-_-

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    "Ross"so... George Ryan Ross the Third..? :3

    NOW YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON!
    March 18th, 2012 at 09:42pm
  • Irbisfreak

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    Bitch plz, did it happen in a school hall...? XD if so, then it was hilarious :D and I really liked this moment "Franklin Iero, will you be my boyfriend so we can flick shit in the sterilised eye of the world together?" it was funny :D and Oh holy motherfucking shit, Gerard is ready to die in the name of love...? :O well, that was a little... That was a huge decision, I wonder how that poison works now C: and I hope that Gerard won't die, obviously C: if it was a different kind of story he could die and it'd fit, but idk if it'd fit this story :D
    March 18th, 2012 at 09:24am
  • VenomCybertron-_-

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    :o *Whoops* GERTARD!!
    Lol
    March 18th, 2012 at 04:21am