Sweet Touch of Poison - Comments

LOL, just wanted to say that Frank is one big BAMF C:

Aww I love Frankie awkwardness!!!
I love this shit, I hope
You update soon!!!

~Pansy Xo

The way I see it, you've got a mistake in A/N... If brain is sexual then tongue is ON a dick... (Okay, I know I'm retarded -.-, don't have to tell you (insert humming Never Tear Us Apart here, even more retarded --.--) actually I meant "don't have to tell me" ---.---) anyway, fuck you sincerely Gee! :'c I really didn't want it to be true :'c and Frank is already head over heels! XD

Now you said this... Gerard HAS to love Frank a romantic love, there's no other way........ Right....? Frank means it, but Gerard didn't make any kissy move or something and yeah... And I think you should use dots and "," in the dialogues C;

I agree with killjoy from detroit when he started crying it turned into a giant "aww" moment.
Update soon!

~Pansy Xo

OHMYYES. Hee, now that I've got that out my system- Frankie & Gee are adorable, FaceBook really just does have annoyingness and arguements, Frankie's dad rules, and Pokémon is one of the best things ever. XD Gerard began crying and made the whole chapter a complete and total "Aww" moment. You go.

Ugh OH MY GERARD!
I fucking love this shit so much
it has to be illegal :D
Update soon!!!

~Pansy Xo

Gerard is sooo obviously flirting C:

Franks Dads Epic! :3

Sweet C:

Pssh, please, you gotta use time skips, they are . And yeah, readers would understand, like XxDemented_SoulxX said. Heehee, I enjoy this story, and you gotta do what you gotta do. If you write what you don't really wanna write, you're not gonna have pride in it. Write what you find necessary, we'll love it as much as we loved Chapters 1 & 2. :D

Then don't write out the walk to Frank's house just jump to
the house scene. I think people would understand...
Well I would.
Either way, I hope your writers block goes away and that you'll
update soon!

~Pansy Xo

Writers block sucks!!!

YAY! You updated!
I love already, I love that you don't have bad grammar like a
load of people do, I can deal with a bit, 'cause I mess up sometimes
people just over fuck it up.
I'm still loving this plot, and this story,
I hope you update soon!

~Pansy Xo

Aw, yeah, I'm excited. I don't really have much to say, y'know, 'cuz there's really nothing to fix or tighten up on. This is awesome. I can't wait for more, keep up the good work! And I do like how Frank & Gerard have similar problems in the way they're viewed in school (except for the whole poison thing...) and one is picked on and one isn't, because not everyone who's similar is going to get screwed up: Not everyone who doesn't act the same will be singled out. Nice realism! ;) Keep it up, I'm waiting~

Hell yeah, this is so original I really like it.
I bet this is gonna become one of my favorite stories soon!!
I hope you update soon!

~Pansy Xo

Comment virginity and page claim!

OHHH! THIS IS SO GOOD!