Set Fire to the Rain - Comments

Squeeeeeeeeeee!
Oh, why do these things not happen in real life?!
I'm hanging tough at the moment Stace. And now eagerly awaiting the next update :) xoxo

@ marsmztik43
Lol. Its coming. ... Sooooon! ;)

waiting...

@ jessclub
Hahaha! I know, I had to go there with the Hummer, its very anti-Eliza, but very Jack like in reaction. Lol!! I am happy you enjoyed, and things should start getting very exciting. Hope you are well and hanging in there. Xoxox

A hummer lol! It seems like the net is closing in on David though he's such a slippery character I think he'll probably be around for a while yet causing havoc and generally being a dick!

ugh, david's a freak, and not in a good way!!! creepy creaper!
enough with the silly game all ready!!! those 2 need to hook up permantly!!!
love!!!! <3

I could really use a bit of hope right now. And a bit of shannon, but that never changes! I think jared should somehow find out about the visit and drama should ensue. Though with David still kicking about, I think there's more drama llama to come anyways! Great chapter! Xo

By Jack, I clearly mean David! Damn for reading things at 7am on a Sunday :(

Boooooooooooooooo to Jack!

Love interest for jared! I wonder how David will get away with this one, I'd like to hear his alibi. Shannon can't stay away forever surely?!

Oohhhhhuh Zoe! Shes in for a ride! And Damn if you didnt get my responses dead right! You know me too well my sistah. Enjoyed the 'filler' chapter too. Investigations are always intriguing. Cant wait for Mooooorrrrreeeee!!! Im sure it will be 'soon' , lolxo

uuummmmmmm; 911????? ;-) love you sis!!!! /// i'm not sure. i think, even guys would stop the charade after such a bad mva. but then again, guys are stupid and stubborn!!!! /// enjoying the suspese!!! keep up the good work!!! can not wait for the next chapters. <3<3<3

uuummmmmmm; 911????? ;-) love you sis!!!! /// i'm not sure. i think, even guys would stop the charade after such a bad mva. but then again, guys are stupid and stubborn!!!! /// enjoying the suspese!!! keep up the good work!!! can not wait for the next chapters. <3<3<3

:( To leave her like that, Shan most have a very strong will. I reeeeeally hope that plan works. >.< David can not win!
Excellent story. =D

Oh Shanimal :(
That's all I have to say!

So this bastardry is all part of the plan is it? Lol. Don't think Jared's plan is going that well at the moment!

@ jessclub
So I am hoping that you enjoyed this chapter! Fingers crossed. Lol! Yep, its going to get interesting. I hope you like where it's going. Will try to post more after Christmas. Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy Healthy and Prosperous New Year <3

Nnnnnnnnngggggg! That's the only noise I can make right now! Drama llama. Awesome change of pace. Can't wait for more. Wishing you a merry Christmas and a great 2013 xoxo

She should totes nurse him back to health, that would be cute lol
Too much sadness at the moment, we need some happy times!
Hope for more soon

Now I'm in Vietnam. I can't stand the tension, I really can't! They must meet and have a big talk very soon. More shannon is also needed lol. Hope you are able to update again soon :)