Everything Changes - Comments

They are too freaking cute! I can't say that enough. I loved how Nate tried to convince Savannah they were cuter than Zoey and Zacky. And Sarah seems nice, though I'm curious what problems she had that caused her to move. :/ Great update! :D

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I'm not going to lie; I wasn't too excited when I saw that this was an Avenged Sevenfold fanfiction, because I'm not much of a fan. But I read it anyways and I was very VERY impressed. I liked your usage of dialogue. You had great details. All-in-all, I loved this. Keep up the good work! :)

Helllllooo, I've come here through comment swap.
I was really hesitant to read this, seeing as it had a prequel, but I'm glad I did anyways. Your story is very good, and I like that I knew what was going on although I hadn't read the previous story. The way you put your characters is amazing. They're definitely easy to relate to. I really like this, keep it up!

-Jess xx

Hiya! I was brought here by comment swap.
I'm not going to lie, I didn't read the whole thing. I saw that there was a prequel and I'm not a huge Avenged fan so I only read the first three chapters to get a feel for it.
I enjoyed your use of dialogue. I feel that people nowadays are shying away from dialogue because they don't know how to format it, but your use was spectacular. I didn't really know much about the story because as I said, I didn't read the prequel, but I can say that what I did read flowed very well. There were limited grammar errors.
Happy writing [:

Oh god, that scene with Zoey and Nate was hilarious. XD I loved that so much. And I laughed when she got the couch cleaned too. And I thought Brian was cute when he was asking Zoey about how Jess feels about him. Loved the update! :D

Lol of course she got the couch cleaned...Her and Nate act like there related

They are too damn cute! I'm going to say that in every chapter haha. XD But I'm happy for them, and I laughed when they were thrown in the pool. Great update!

Oh there so cute together...i love that there finally together...

This a very cute story so far. I like that they're all big teddy bears and it's all so sweet and innocent. I hope you continue, but I also hope that it gets a little more drama and intensity to it. Im sure it will as it's only the beginning so there's surely more to come.

It didn't suck at all! It was cute and I loved it. Please update again soon :)

awwww...sweetness overload!!!they are cute couple!!!

Lol she covered the couchs in plastic...very awkward moment though Nate didn't seem bothered by it

Oh man, how awkward was that. But I found it hilarious that Zoey covered the furniture with plastic. XD And Zacky and Nate would find that hilarious. But I'm still excited about Zoey and Zacky! I can't wait to see how the guys react knowing that they're together now. Great update! :D

I'm so glad they've finally admitted their feelings. Please update soon :)

I'm so glad they've finally admitted their feelings. Please update soon :)

Hahaha nate he would laugh... they kissed i love the guys

Yay they finally kissed! She should've stayed at Zacky'svhouse. She won't be able to look at Savannah and Nate the same ever again, but so freaking happy they finally kissed..no more of this just friends

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do you know how freaking happy I am now?! You freaking made my day with that chapter! :D The whole thing was sweet, but they finally kissed! I screamed on the inside from pure joy! And the ending was funny too, but I'm too damn excited about that kiss! Loved the update!

Aaaaw what a cute chapter.

They're so dumb for that hahahah