Ever After - Comments

I just found this story and I really like it, but I feel like it's moving just a little too slow. We all know what is going to happen already but the same things keep happening.

I'm subscribed and I'm going to be waiting for the next one to find out how this story continues and morphs into the little cutesy story that is going to make me freak out every time Auden and River are together. (:

i just want to say this is wonderful i love it
but i do feel bad for repunzel like she is all inlove
while auden is having self conflict
over all its going good keep p the good work

I love this story! I don't know if I should nudge our River toward Carsen or Auden because I like them both... darn... I bet it kinda stinks to be Repunzel right?
Anyway, I can't wait for the next update! Hope its soon! :)

Oh, so River is in denial... What can I say, delicious... C: but Auden is "worse" in that matter - he'd kissed a boy (tum tum tum tum) and River didn't C: it was good C: there were 2 typos I found - "There was no way I liked me" I think you meant men instead of me, because it sounds ridiculous C: and "You are too kid" kind?

I see a forbidden love coming our way

so tragically beautiful!!!!!!!! i want carsen to tell river how he feels. i want river to like him back. but i want auden to love river and river love him back. and i dont want a non-happy ending for rapunzal. D: i dont know what to want! but river is definitely a cutie!
oh, and Ned? is he. . . ?

Luv ur story! If you would like for me to show you some things that certainly need fixed, just message me:) i would love to help you make this fantastic story as perfect as it can be. Love you both!!!!!! (if you haven't noticed i am a regular reader to both of you) <3

awwww <3 and I just want them all to be happy...even Carsen >.> I'm sort of on the "screw Auden he has Rapunzel" team. but if Rapunzel got with Carsen and River got with Auden it'd work...I just don't want Carsen to end up sad...can you tell I like Carsen?

So dhgsjegdhbddjs corny C: hihi, I really like Ned, he has nose for romance :D and Auden, I really pity him, I suppose :/ he can't really find himself a partner or idk, break up without some scandal or something :/ Rapunzel is starting to annoy me :D idk why too, maybe just because she's in the way of Auden and River, but it's not only her :/ though idk if you are doing this story as a pure "fairy tale" or based on some fact too, but if it had some facts, then actually there shouldn't be anything wrong if Auden was married to Rapunzel and be with River in some way too, okay I think I'm getting too worked up, I really liked it anygay C:

Update with sexy scene??? Eh eh??

Ned is on to something isn't he? I bet he's like a ninja detective! XD okay, so they probably didn't have ninja detectives but whatever....
Okay I can't wait to read River's thoughts about this whole 'You should find yourself a girl' thing from Auden's dad. Can't wait to see how this plays out so, update soon pwease thanks! :)

LOL the last line was just hilarious XD but very true indeed C; I feel kinda bad for River, being thrown in that glamorous life without warning :/ buuut I'm sure he'll be fine and even more in the end C: can't wait for the dinner and Auden's thoughts, that'll be sure funny to read after discovering his secret doings with his cousin C: he's SO very much gayyyyyyyyyyy :3

aww River is so cute <3

River is just the cutest! :3 I hope he makes a lot of new friends in the castle and I wonder what's going to happen at dinner! Can't really think of what else to say so I'm just gonna stop here.
Can't wait for next update :)

Carsen seems to really love River :3 it makes me kinda sad, 'cause I really like Carson and don't wanna see him hurt. oh well *-*
Uhuh, Auden is so seriously getting attached, in a veeeery good way :D And River is so damn cute and adorable and stuff :3
I get the feeling something's off with Rapunzel, but my feelings are wrong most of the time so I don't really know what to think :$
This is beautiful.

Haha it's so awesome! :D though I think it is supposed to be a fan-fiction... They're so adorable, though I feel bad for Rapunzel... :/ but not too bad C: Auden can continue to think about River like that C: because it's cute :3

Hiya guys! I found this story earlier today but forgot to comment my bad! Don't hate me :)
Anywho.... I really really like this story! I think its kinda sad that River is moving away from Carsen but he's gonna visit right?
Auden no matter what you keep telling yourself, you are obviously jealous! *rolls eyes* people...
On a random note I love River's kitty! I really like cats :P
Anyway can't wait for your next update because I'd like to read more!

I KNEW HE HAD A CRUSH ON HIM!!!! >:D
Why would River leave Carsen
He had better come visit him
I love you :3

Oh my god, Carsen has a crush on River
Auden is jealous of Carsen
and River and Rapunzel are totally oblivious
This is lovely >:D

I'm fallin in love with this story :3
Auden is totally jealous xD He's so so amazing *-* And River is the most adorable thing!
This was such a beautiful idea! :DDD It really makes me smile :$
More, more! :D

Own, this is so lovely :3 Like... I don't even know how you came up with this, but it's AMAZING, brilliant really!
I'm definitely addicted :D
I want updates! Pwease *-*
<3