Pangaea - Comments

Do you still update? if you go, then UPDATE PLEAASE! :)

Yay! Another update :D
This was a great update, as usual :)
I think Tulia will agree with the plan, I hope she does! It seems like she would.
Anyways, update soon! :D

My favorite part was your incorporating Spanish into the newest chapter. I'll be starting Spanish 4/AP next year and I'm excited. haha. Um.. corrections (if you feel the need to fix it) you might want to put "Quienes son ellas?" "Quienes son las personas?" because you still need the verbs in there. "Son amigas de Tulia" (though 'con' would work, 'de' is a bit more proper, but if you want to keep Marley's Spanish a bit broken, I can understand that!) Same thing with "'Conoces a Tulia?'" If you want it to be respectful then there's the whole thing with keeping it in the 'Usted' form so it would be just "Conoce" Annddd finally, (man I feel horrible for pointing all this out but I just feel you should know even if you don't use any of it. lol) "Me dicen que ellas son tus amigas." for "they tell me that they're your friends". Just some things that I picked up on. I'm still learning too, but I think that's what it should look like!

Anyway, this one had good plot development and I like how you introduced Tulia "'Or well, they at least try to put it more politely. But anyway...'" Best line, in my personal opinion. I'm looking forward to your next update and hopefully learning more about this new character and perhaps another within the next couple of chapters. :D

HAVE FUN ON YOUR VACATION! ^_^

Yes, an update! :)
Haha, I loved it but I kind of wish it was longer. I just enjoy reading your stories/writing in general. I think Tulia will, like, agree with the plans just because of how she was with the whole Nick thing. It was a great update overall. Can't wait for more! (:

Yay, you finally updated :D
I was honestly surprised that Amberly knew that much about everything, not gonna lie. lol. I can't wait to see what happens when they go see Tulia!
Great update and I can't wait for the next one :)

Love the story so far, but I had to re-read it on the third chapter :P

So... Mibba went and turned everything upside down on us.. Though I do like this new way to comment. Anyway, so I would just like to say that this is just getting interesting to say the least, and I hope to see a new update soon! I know school's biting into everyone's time lately, so I hope you're doing well. I'm excited for the introductions of the new characters and the places that Marley will visit. Hope to hear from you soon! :D

You're welcome, again! (:
I'm a little bit confused, but that's probably because it hasn't been updated in a while :o And I need to go back and re-read it, probably. I do not think Amberly is being all that honest. Maybe with some of it as the respect thing, but there's got to be more to it. As for Marley meeting the other world owners, I don't think they'll be so gung-ho on the Pangaea idea. Well, maybe not at first. Loved the update! More soon?

So my last comment got deleted on this one too? Cause I swear I commented last time too!
Oh well, I loved the update :)
So there's a lot to think about with the Pangaea issue. There's a lot more to lose than to gain :/
I wonder what Darwin and the owners of the other worlds are gonna say :o
I can't wait for the next update! :D

Waaa, can't wait for another update, you need to like do 2 a week;D

It seems like the cons outweigh the pros..
If I were her, I wouldn't go through with it because it seems like a lot to lose. But I guess once you lose someone you love like that, I'd go through with it. But I think Marley will..unless she finds a way around everything. Loopholes rule.
Lol anyway, update soon? (:
And I thought the security thing was pretty funny. I get they're a top secret organization, but really?

-.- Mibba, I swear.
Well, I can't wait until the next update! (:
(Hopefully they have all of this under control and the website wont spazz again!)

Like I said before, I can't wait for this story to start :) I'm definitely subscribing!

Yep... I'm waiting! :D
This looks fabulous and I can't even begin to describe how much I'll be looking forward to your first chapter! I see you might be going in the direction of a cliche sort of ending, so remember, it's not at all bad to want a happy ending to your story. Or perhaps you could just be one of those people that makes the sequel with the hope that it will be okay, when really, you've been plotting for it to end with Marley and Nick apart.... lol. Just kidding, but still darlin', I'm hooked. ;]

I'm happy this is up, and just from the description, I'm hooked.
It has me interested, as per usual, and I can tell this is going to be just as good (if not better) than Stopping the World. Looking forward to the first update (:
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