Holding Hands Won't Be Enough - Comments

Love the update! This story is so different then others that I have read. I can't wait to see what happens.

just found this site a few days ago & I'm glad I did. this is one of my fave fan-fics by far ♥

The only details I really gave came from Bam, "they’re together, and then they’re not, then they are.", and from Ville stammering nervously saying, "“It wasn’t a planned.. I.. I didn’t even necessarily want.. I hate.. She’s not..” and sadly explaining that he's with her, "In the absence and crushing reality of not having you.", to Milly in chapter 11.

So I've given no inkling to what's happened, happening, or will happen - yet - but what I'm planning is devilishly good!

love it as always!
question time: are you changing some of the details between what happened with Jonna and Ville?
like I don't know making her pregnant or something like that? or are you following whatever happened?
god I'm confusing...do you get what I'm asking?
anyway lovely update! cant wait for Milly to tell Ville!

I loved the update, I read that last paragraph and I went, "OH SHIT SHE'S PREGNANT ISN'T SHE!?" Soooo suspenseful yet so good D:<

I absolutely love this story. Its so cute & well written. Plus I love that the plot is expanded but every chapter is interesting & keeps me entertained. Can't wait for the next update! (:

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I'm so glad you disagree with her not telling Ville! I really wanted a character that's dug herself into a hole that she has to get out of. I wanted an element of dislike to her choices that you don't usually get in fics. I didn't want a 'turn up on the doorstep with baby', or a 'one night stand then baby' story. She's hurt and has been spiteful, but has realised that she went about her hurt in the worst way.

Do keep your eye on Seth, you may be right to have suspicions.

And no, Bam isn't single. This will come to light in the next few chapters, once Milly reaches Philly.

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I'm so glad you disagree with her not telling Ville! I really wanted a character that's dug herself into a hole that she has to get out of. I wanted an element of dislike to her choices that you don't usually get in fics. I didn't want a 'turn up on the doorstep with baby', or a 'one night stand then baby' story. She's hurt and has been spiteful, but has realised that she went about her hurt in the worst way.

Do keep your eye on Seth, you may be right to have suspicions.

And no, Bam isn't single. This will come to light in the next few chapters, once Milly reaches Philly.

For those who don't know what we mean by Mary Sue, it's all here - Mary Sue Wikipedia.

I'm so glad you disagree with her not telling Ville! I really wanted a character that's dug herself into a hole that she has to get out of. I wanted an element of dislike to her choices that you don't usually get in fics. I didn't want a 'turn up on the doorstep with baby', or a 'one night stand then baby' story. She's hurt and has been spiteful, but has realised that she went about her hurt in the worst way.

Do keep your eye on Seth, you may be right to have suspicions.

And no, Bam isn't single. This will come to light in the next few chapters, once Milly reaches Philly.

Commenting on your 'Mary Sue' comment --I like Milly. Though that doesn't mean she's a Mary Sue. She's a strong woman with convictions and a wonderful mother. She's definitely not a Bella. And though I love the way you've written her I wholeheartedly disagree with her decision to not tell Ville about the child. I love her yet with some things I don't agree.

I really have an uneasy feeling about Seth and I'm glad that Ville is picking up on it because I have my suspicions. And I love the fact that you're taking it easy and not revealing everything all at once. Keep writing, love. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Question: Is Bam single in this story?

omg this one of the best ville stories ive read! i love it!!! you are a very good writer and i love love love Milly. shes awesome. and her relationship with the guys is perfect. just kick Seth to the curb because i dont like him. haha

I loved this update, but I think that Milly working for Bam will be a bad idea. Something between Ville and her is bound to happen. I hope she comes to her senses soon and drops Seth. He's sweet and everything, but he has a trait of possessiveness I don't like. Keep up the great work, hon. <3 Love it.

Loved the update. C: Keep up the great work.

Loved the update. C: Keep up the great work.

amazing as always :)
absolutely love it!
cant wait for an update ^^

I absolutely adore this story, especially this new chapter.. I was so excited to see it updated and the creative outlook on how things are working out and developing are lovely. (: Keep up the amazing work, you've got such a lovely writing style.

Awh, dammit! I wrote all my old fics using, 'you', and it slips in every once and a while out of a dying habit. I'm on the case!

*swoon

Oops, typo. ^^"

I loved this chapter. Oscar is adorable! That whole scene was hilarious. Seth is--interesting to say the least. I'm glad you did not make her soon and let her agree to his proposal of marriage and adoption. That would have been disappointingly typical. I just loved this whole chapter. Her voice is so strong. And your writing style seems to flow so well. Don't mind my gushing. You deserve it. I did catch a couple of grammatical errors.

'”I just.. Argh!” he dragged his hands through his hair and slumped himself down on the ottoman in front of you her'

And one other one that has escaped me, but otherwise it's perfect. Can't wait until the next chapter.

To everyone who has commented so far, please read the foot notes at the end of Chapter 12. It's for you x