Holding Hands Won't Be Enough - Comments

I read this all in one night. I love it. Your voice is strong and Milly is such a multidimensional character. I love the fact that her personality sets her apart and makes her original. She is definitely not a Mary Sue and this fanfiction is well-written. I love it. I actually was telling this story to my boyfriend last night and he was so into it. He actually thought it was real and told me to go to hell when I told him it was a fanfic! Keep on writing. There aren't that many well-written Ville fics on here anymore and it's refreshing to come across one after so long. It inspires me to update my own. I'm currently on the 32nd chapter and am quite stuck, but this made me want to finish it. Like I said, keep writing, love. You definitely have a natural talent.

shall I say it again?
absolutely adore it!

Love it!!!

love it :D
update soon please
amazing story :)

Iloveit when can you get the next chapter out.

This story is fantastic. I don't want to wait for another chapter, haha, I want to know what happens next !!

Very good. Very good indeed!

I suggest tomorrow, that's a day :)
Great chapter, you should update more regularly.. I'm just too damn curious to see how all of this will play out.

Kidding aside though, you don't need us to set a deadline. Just try once a week? Every saturday or something? I think that'd make us all really happy :)

Awesome job!
-Xx

This story is amazing! Keep the chapters coming!

B E A UTIFUL CAN'T WAIT FOR AN UPDATE

LOVE it so far... can't wait for more =)

Keep writing this!! :)

Lovely chapter! Your writing is very realistic! :) Caught a tiny error though :

"Milly this smells so good!" Linde grinned, picking up his beer glass. You scowled at him for using your nickname and shook your head.

Other than that, great job! :)

-Xx

Love the idea you've come up with. So amazing can't wait to see where you go with this story. I also saw the other comments and if you need a BETA I would be happy to help. Love the story!!

Great chapter! :) Especially liked the end, the talk with Gwen and Bam.

-Xx

Dammit, I spent hours going through it trying to get all the 'you's' changed.
Thanks hun.

Hah, you're welcome, doll :)
I don't have time to BETA, but I have noticed you sometimes switch between first and second person.. She puts Osi to bed so you have time alone.. (just making that up as an example) So maybe you want to check the chapters again when you have time.
Great job, nice way to get Ville back into the story! :)
-Xx

Thank you very much lovely, it means a lot.
Yay! First subscriber loving!

I love what you've come up with so far! Great job!
Curious to see where you'll take things, you've got a subscriber in me! :)

-Xx