that was a very cute and unique chapter
March 28th, 2012 at 03:30am
Our Perfect Love Story - Comments
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It was good, and youre writing is great! just nothing happened in the chapter... nothing much... she left the place with a guy... and that would sum up this chapter... it is GREAT and I love this, but I just wish something would occur in some fashion... get what I mean? I get there needs to be fillers and places where nothing really happens, but even then you can sum things up in a little bit more than, "Noel and Cara left the place they were at together" honest I could tell you that and you could read whatever you're writing next No problem.... I mean I LOVE this story! you're writing is AMAZINg and I love the plot concept, but you said you wanted criticism, so that is what I think...March 19th, 2012 at 10:44pm
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Update soon!March 19th, 2012 at 03:03am
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May I just say that hello at the end sent chills into my body! It was so weirdly amazing :) Hahaa I will read on!March 16th, 2012 at 05:56pm
