Killing Yourself - Comments

I wish I had read the first two to have gotten a good feel of what was happening in this one. I enjoy it very much. I'm definitely going to subscribe and keep in touch. Once again there are a few grammatical and spelling errors watch out and always double check before posting. I really enjoy your style of writing it flows nicely.
I also enjoy that you switch between the characters and allow an insight into their minds and what is really going on. The characters are well developed and seem to be going through a lot of turmoil. This speaks well through your writing and the wording you chose.

Both characters are very well developed, from the first book all the way to this one (the third). Your writings are so fucking interesting and I'm so addicted, ya know. So post soon bitch, will ya? :p

Really interesting, update soon, kay? I wanna know what Kaya's next move will be. XD

What will Marian do now? Who is the one who killed Xavier? Curiosity killed the cat but whatever. XD

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This was very good. I like the characters so far, and it's not to descriptive but does have enough that lets you picture the scene. It makes me want to read on & the grammars very good. There are a few spelling errors, but very few.
Keep on writing!~ (:

Update xd

Don't do this to me. Don't keep me waiting. XD

Come on, post the next chapter please.

That was a nice and fresh start. :)

Gen has an affair??? Wow, I wasn't expecting that but that makes it more amazing. :)

I am curious and anxious to find out what happens next!! Please update again soon!!

Brilliant writing. I love the concept and your writing style is superb. Your flow and description use is near flawless and that's hard to find these days where both compliment each other so well. The dialogue flows very nice.

I am intrigued to find out what happens with the characters you created. The way you write can definitely captivate someone.

Well done girl. :)

Come on! lol no stopping please? No sims3, we're addicted to your stories!!! More please