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  • casserby-x

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    I wish I had read the first two to have gotten a good feel of what was happening in this one. I enjoy it very much. I'm definitely going to subscribe and keep in touch. Once again there are a few grammatical and spelling errors watch out and always double check before posting. I really enjoy your style of writing it flows nicely.
    I also enjoy that you switch between the characters and allow an insight into their minds and what is really going on. The characters are well developed and seem to be going through a lot of turmoil. This speaks well through your writing and the wording you chose.
    August 15th, 2012 at 05:11am
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    August 15th, 2012 at 05:04am
  • DevilboyKyle

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    Both characters are very well developed, from the first book all the way to this one (the third). Your writings are so fucking interesting and I'm so addicted, ya know. So post soon bitch, will ya? :p
    August 13th, 2012 at 07:00pm
  • Keitherless

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    Really interesting, update soon, kay? I wanna know what Kaya's next move will be. XD
    August 13th, 2012 at 06:47pm
  • TombRaider

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    What will Marian do now? Who is the one who killed Xavier? Curiosity killed the cat but whatever. XD
    August 13th, 2012 at 01:50pm
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    Comment Swap~
    This was very good. I like the characters so far, and it's not to descriptive but does have enough that lets you picture the scene. It makes me want to read on & the grammars very good. There are a few spelling errors, but very few.
    Keep on writing!~ (:
    August 10th, 2012 at 01:53am
  • casserby-x

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    August 9th, 2012 at 04:20am
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    August 9th, 2012 at 03:12am
  • Keitherless

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    Update xd
    August 4th, 2012 at 03:02pm
  • TombRaider

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    Don't do this to me. Don't keep me waiting. XD
    August 4th, 2012 at 02:55pm
  • DevilboyKyle

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    Come on, post the next chapter please.
    August 2nd, 2012 at 05:23am
  • TombRaider

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    That was a nice and fresh start. :)

    Gen has an affair??? Wow, I wasn't expecting that but that makes it more amazing. :)
    July 17th, 2012 at 08:52am
  • Keitherless

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    I am curious and anxious to find out what happens next!! Please update again soon!!
    July 17th, 2012 at 07:10am
  • DevilboyKyle

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    Brilliant writing. I love the concept and your writing style is superb. Your flow and description use is near flawless and that's hard to find these days where both compliment each other so well. The dialogue flows very nice.

    I am intrigued to find out what happens with the characters you created. The way you write can definitely captivate someone.

    Well done girl. :)
    July 17th, 2012 at 06:49am
  • DessiCakez

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    Come on! lol no stopping please? No sims3, we're addicted to your stories!!! More please
    April 4th, 2012 at 04:46am
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