The Capitol's Tribute - Comments

@ kassipoola
I'm actually--believe it or not--rewriting this story. I've gotten through the first four chapters, but I haven't posted them yet. I really want to start this up again and the movie coming out certainly helped kick start that! Thank you for your comment (:

Being this story back!! I an in so much love and I was quite upset when I got to the last chapter! I love this so much! Catching fire just came out so maybe you'll get re inspired!(: I do hope you continue(: this story tugged my heart stings and not a lot if stories do that to me(:

I cried my heart out when Rixa realized Brant had died. My goodness- this story is absolutely brilliant. Sooooooo well written. You're doing fan fictions the correct way. <3

Hey!
I have a Hunger Games story that I just started. I see you have one posted (which is quite brilliant, I might add) I was wondering if you wanted to check out my Peeta Mellark fan fiction as well? :)

But let me warn you, it's the first hunger game story that I have written...ever...so it will definitely not be as great as yours! <3

*sighs* I swear it's like your writing is a gift from the gods. Sorry I took so long to comment on this. Been busy, but how have you been? I miss you >.<
What Johanna said was right. With Rixa saying what she did, it would have been easier if she just died. Now that she is the victor there is a large target on her back. Snow is a sneaky and sadistic SOB. I do feel bad for Rixa, but this is part of the movement or rebellion, whatever you want to call it. Time for some action!
I can't wait to see that and as for Rixa trying to make the engagement more believable...I wonder what you are going to pull. It's going to be hard with her confessing her feelings like that.
This story makes my heart hurt...in a good way. haha

FREDDY IS DEAD.
BRANT IS DEAD.
MY HEART IS NOW DEAD.

This story is so amazing, oh my goodness! I agree with the last comment, I thought both of them were going to make it out alive. I guess not. I'm glad that Rixa won, but I'm also really sad for her. And of course, Snow isn't happy, biut he's never satisfied so whatever. I liked that you had Johanna come talk to her. I thought that was really nice of her to warn Rixa and to thank her as well. I wonder what Snow's got up his sleeve. Also, I wonder how Peeta feels abut all of this.

GAH I AM SO ASDFtTHfDfghhgjkSADfY RIGHT NOW.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

Oh my God. HE DIED?!

I was most definitely not one of those people who thought it was going to be him. I thought you'd pull a Suzanne Collins and let them both live. :(

Ah... Well.. Superb chapter and I'm eagerly waiting for more!

Oh my gosh. I knew it.
I love this story! :)

I think it's going to Brant who's going to die.
Ugh, this story is so good!
I'm in love.

Damn! This story is amazing. UPDATE please!

I just spent the last hour or so reading this entire story and it has become one of my favorites. You don't sugarcoat things--you make them real and that, in turn, makes me turn up or laugh or cheer. And you're writing is flawless.

I really cannot say enough good things about this story. It's just so good and I'm so excited for the next update.

I hate you.

WHY WHY WHY WHY.
ugh. I seriously ugh, why.
I suck, seriously. I always do this to myself. I always read THG fanfictions, when I know that there will only be one winner, and someone will die. Like a sibling, or a little kid that the OC gets attached too, or they fall in love with another person and that one dies too. and and and I hate it. UGH BUT I LOVE IT SO MUCH I CAN'T STOP.
AND YOU.. OMG
YOU
YOU ARE AWESOME, OK. I LOVE YOU.

This made me cry.
Though, I did like how you made Freddy's death not so brutal.. but then you had to go and add lava that totally dissolved his body.
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oh btw, on chapter 25, you put 'Jenna' instead of Johanna.
thinking of the actor?

“Do you think Jenna will say she’s proud of me?” Freddy asked meekly, averting eye contact.

This is BRILLIANT!! I FREAKING LOVE THIS! It makes me cry (happy and sad tears) and it's wonderful in every way. :) This story is amazing. I love it and you do a lovely job writing it!
Update soon!

OH MY FRICKING GOSH
I AM SPEECHLESS
I HAVE NO WORDS
THIS...THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND WONDERFUL AND JUST ONE OF THE BEST HUNGER GAMES FANFICS ON THIS SITE
YOUR WORDS MAKE MY HEART HURT
AND PEETA AND ALL OF HIS EMOTIONS
AND RIXA AND HER COURAGE
AND FREDDY AND HIS ADORABLENESS
AND U G H
you're amazing.

Oh my god this story is fucking wonderful. You have done such a good job writing it. I feel like im reading another hunger games book. Amazing.

*sighs* The things that you do to me when you update this story. It just keeps getting better and better. The last part was just so intense it kept me on my toes the whole time. Rixa's panic could be felt when she debated over saving Finnick and Peeta. It was just a whirlwind of emotions and craziness in such a small scene and the cliffhanger just made it worse haha I really want to know what happens and cannot wait until how it turns out.

OMG!!! I'm so happy that you've updated twice! I love your story and I am so happy you picked it back up! You're doing great! Keep up the good work

Oh please don't say Brant died!! :o UPDATE~pretty please? :))

Loving this!
Update!

I'm sorry you got into a car accident but I am glad you're back writing. I like this chapter actually. I know it's away from the games but it's nice to know what's going on in the story in the capitol.