The Capitol's Tribute - Comments

First of all sorry to hear that you got in a car accident hope you feel better as for the story I didn't expect anything more fantastic as this chapter. Yes it didn't show Rixa or any blood but it did show Haymitch's dilemma and how the three of them reacted to Rixa's stupid or maybe rather smartly stupid attempt to gain a upper hand by diving into cornucopia. Whatever the point is I totally forgot but I love this story so much and happy to see that you updated. Can't wait for the next one.

Aahhhh!! Impatient!!! You said a week ago that you were writing new chapters!! It's like you're teasing us! Please post a new one soon! I might die if you don't.

Ok, I just finished reading this earlier today. And..
AH, I'M SO SCARED!
I really, really, really, don't want Brant or Freddy to die! D: It's going to make me so sad.
Ugh, I seriously don't know why I do this to myself, reading THG fanfictions, they ruin me!

<3 I wanna read more.

I found this story last night and have already finished all 21 chapters. Please continue updating!!! I love it so far!

Please, please update. I just found this story today and already can't wait for the next update.

The Bloodbath was awesome! This story is way amazing! Thanks for entering this in my contest. I can't wait to see what happens next and who dies.

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Ahh this is so thrilling!! :))

Aw, poor Anna. She died right away. I wasn't expecting that, for Rixa to help Freddy when she saw his expression. This is getting really exciting to see how this is all going to pan out. When is Rixa going to find Brant or Freddy? Or maybe she will find one or the other dead or alive? It will be a real shocker if Rixa dies by the end of this story :'( that would truly be sad.

Awww poor rixa

Awww poor rixa

I heart Freddy too and why do I have a feeling that he is going to die :'( he's just so adorable and knowing that the probability of him dying is saddening unless he plans on killing Rixa and Brant to gain an edge or something. I have no idea if he is doing the same thing his sister did when she was in the arena. he seems strong enough and being a kid has it's advantages. Katniss did make a good point that Rixa and her are very similar and I just can't wait to see what Rixa does in the arena and what will happen to Brant. It would be tragic if they don't mend their relationship if one of them dies.

Ahh I love it!! So cute :)

You're awesome storyline just gets better every single chapter. I was not expecting Peeta to visit her and i couldn't help but coo at the both of them. They are so adorable together. I cannot wait for the Games to start! :) to see what you come up with. I do feel bad for Brant, nothing is going right for him even if it is intentionally. Great chapter and good luck on your finals!

Very well written and plotted lovely. Ive only ever seen the film and was never interested enough to read the books, but your writing this story has inspired me and I may just do so now.

You use great description, but my fear is that you may overly describe things, which could lead a viewer to skipping most of the story, just to get to the interesting parts. Just something to keep in check .

Happy writing and lovely story!

oh my holy shit balls. thank you for helping me fail my spanish final. i've spent all night reading this when i'm supposed to be studying... but i think it's worth it. this is an amazing story. btw, don't kill off anna any time soon. she has my name :)

not mad at you for not updating?!?! Why I should throw potatoes at you!!! But I love potatoes so you are safe... for now :) Cool update. Very sneaky of Haymitch... wonderful way of showing the hard hitting truth realization and such. I implore you not to make Rixa some sappy mess and a little less like Katniss... I see quite a few similarities there. You could always make some big decision which cleary shows their differences. Maybe in the arena you could even add in some skills she picked up in the Capitol plus flashbacks to make the story even more uniquely yours. UPDATE!!! or face the wrath of my...carrots. Yea sounds about right. Carrots. :D

That's crazy!! Oh my gosh!

Of course Haymitch would come up with something that would give Rixa the upper hand. Very smart indeed. I was shocked to see that you have updated, has it really only been two months? Seems longer haha I was thinking about this story the other day and now here is the a new chapter! Finnick is one hella of guy. Just love him to death. I feel bad for Rixa, this is just a horrible predicament. :(

I read the summary and was like oh my, this is going to be great. I love your selection of words. You are quite descriptive. I like the idea as well. I love how unhappy she is about Katniss and Peeta. I like how you have done this. It is really good. I can’t wait to read more.-I’ve only read the first chapter so far, but I shall continue to read.-

Well I just found this, and I really like it a lot. It was an interesting idea to take someone who lives in the capitol and actually knows the sponsors as a friend before being a tribute. I also enjoy how she hides her token from Katniss as if she doesn't want them to think she's copying her. Freddy is so freaking adorable! Hopefully he does well like his sister, because he is too cute. I also enjoy how she's not just forgotten what happened with Peeta. My only thing is I wish to see more of Katniss' side. I mean are she and Peeta romantic, or is more like it was arena strategy and now they are stuck together on an account of Snow? Does she really want Gale and Peeta want Rixa? I absolutely cannot wait to read more!!