Shattered By Broken Dreams - Comments

I was going through my subscriptions and I found this, I loved this story so much please come back ;~;

Oh I love this story oh so much! Your writing is awesome sauce and while I usually read Brian stories you are making me love Zacky. I can't wait for the next part. Yay kissing and a date!

Oooh! They gon' go out on a date! That should be interesting.

Ohhhhh I can't wait for Brian's dance lol Vannah and Zacky were so cute :)

cheese covered sexdoll LMAO!! i'd expect jimmy to say something like that so the fact that it was brian made it that much better

aawe vannah and zee are so darn cute together!! <3 'em!

*flails violently* <3 I love you. :D I like this chapter.

***squeal*** FINALLYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!! They need to be together :D and they need to tell on her bastard of a father!!!!!!! And Brian doing the moonwalk ... Gotta see that lol And grabbing his crotch..... :P ***dirty thoughts***

Billie Jean! Hell yeah!

hahahah somewhere over the rainbow.. ya know i'd LOVE to hear Matt scream that song live.. now that'd be fuckin' epic as hell!! that some lyrics are sung normal and nice and then roaaaar!! heheheh.. ooh.. now i've got a new dream.. already got one wish to come true- him and david draiman to sing together on a song.. (need him and jacoby shaddix to sing together now..)

hahahahahahhah brian doing the moonwalk.. awesome!!

aawe aren't vannah and zee just too cute?? holding hands and blushing like teenagers AND THEY KISSED!!!! wiiee!!

Oh muh gawd! Can I please have some more of this story? I mean, I just read like, the first few chapters and I'm already hooked! I need more!

Ermahgad when are you gonna update? Anyway with that piece of sexy sitting next to me I'd be hyperventilating or something jesus christ I want them to have hot sex or something haha.. Great story btw can't wait for the next chapter :)

Im actually obsessed. I hated Zacky at first and felt so bad for Savannah and now all I want is for them to be together because Zacky really does regret what happened. They're a perfect couple and there is not one thing i dont like about this story

i really like your story :) please update sooon

I'm actually obsessed with this story!

Holy hell an update!
I got to say my favorite thing about this chapter was the dialogue. You write the chemistry of all these people so well.

OH MY GOD I MISSED THIS STORY I LOVE YOU FOR UPDATING!!! It was amazing as usuall I really hope you update me often. Bless Jimmys little cotton socks he soo adorable, Zee and Vanna just need to get down to it already! XD

ugh i miss his snakebites!! *pouts* i wanted to do snakebites BUT got talked out of it since i've got this uhm, beautymark or whatever it's called in english above my lip so my brother said it'd look superweird..

ANYWAY back to this AWESOME story
i totally re-read the chapter before this new one, just to update my brain and was I happy too, I once again got to laugh at the image of matt and the boys doin' bee gees.. lmao!! and damn.. to imagine Matt in tight white pants.. GUH!! *drools* i mean that man got one hell of a butt- and other things *cough cough*

and then the new chapter.. jimbo.. how I love him!!
“I didn’t realize Zacky was on the menu,” Jimmy laughed. “Does he come with fries?” *giggles* so cute and funny.. I can totally picture jimmy asking that with a straight- but mildly cunfused face
gnome-sex?? bahahahah now that sounds interesting!!

and goddamn there's a lot of sexual-tension going on between zee and vannah!! it's going to explode!

wow now that's a long comment- could go on but wouldn't want to bore ya to death

Catching up on this baby. I totally dig this and Savannah is saucy. ;) I especially loved the "John Travolta" bit with Jimmy. HAHAHA! In all seriousness I can't even imagine having an accident and losing my legs. I'm really liking the plot and the way you're portrayed the boys. Update soon!

“Holy crap, the lunch box has landed,” “I think the front row just got pregnant.”
“How the hell has he fit in those pants?”

Matt was doing John Travolta like pelvic thrusts which were making the front row almost pass out.
“If he’s not careful he can put someone’s eye out with that thing!”
“Well, I think they won this one,” “I’m no match for the anaconda. That is some serious ball separation he’s got going on there.”

OH MY GOD YOU ALL BUT KILLED ME WITH THIS CHAPTER!! <3

squishing Mr Happy- hahahahah funny name Matt! Gosh I just love this story so much- and their music challenge things are so funny
aawh zee had problems keeping his wittle fwiend down yeah, i think dinner can be very very interesting..
poor jimbo being reminded of the spiders.. *shivers*

Dick jokes will never not be funny. Jimmy's fear of spiders, Zacky's diet, and what Matt's packing had me remembering the peak of my A7X fangirling days.