Shattered By Broken Dreams - Comments

this story has me cracking up every single chapter!!!!!!!! love how Avenged has to sing Nutbush City Limits....hahahah...Epic!

I REALLY like this story! It's well written, funny at times, good characters, good time line and plot line.. It's believable and I could see most of this tuff happen in real life, well probably all but not in one go.. xD good story and I'm subscribing.

Just found and love.. can't wait for more.

Hahaha! Oh my god!

This is addictive!
I giggled a little through the last chapter ;)
Please update soon !

Oh, and the parts with the Berry brothers as Dolly Parton and Zack and Brian's pelvic thrusting had me fucking hysterical. Okay I'm done now.

Oh my god, so I heard awhile ago that Brian got a tattoo on his back that he didn't like so he'd never show is back in pictures, and in chapter 14 on the bottom picture you can see him sitting shirtless with his back to the camera, and it says ''Haner'' in funky lettering. I don't know why but that made my day. Carry on.

So I just started reading this and I'm up to chapter seven. It's safe to say that I chortled at this part:
“That’s Zacky’s girlfriend Gena. She’s permanently orange. I think her Dad fucked a cheesy puff or something.”
Oh my Thor this is fantastic <3

oh god first i pictured jimmy and zee trying to get onto the bus, with help from brian and matt- which was hilarious!!

then the berry's with wigs and balloon-boobs- pmslmao!!

and brian pelvic thrusts?? *passed out on the floor*

totally loved this chapter- as always!! heheheheh <3 ooh, what's up with her dad though?? now that's a mystery!! and vannah- was that a memory or wishful thinking??

Loved it im also getting a nice mental image of Brian and Zacky doing pelvic thrusts :) Happy me :D

Savannah is a badass bitch!
The statements were amusing too.

Just caught up lol ive been reading this all night. Im loving it. Cheesey puff hahaha thats epic shes a damn psyco. I hope vannah and zv can make omends. And I really want to know what her dad did/said to zacky.. Please wright more soon :-D

“Bitch is lucky I didn’t shove the damn thing up her ass.” bahahahahahah!!! soooooooooo funny!! ooh mike.. i didn't really remember him *hides with shame* i thought it would be a girl on gena's side but uh this was kind of worse but the bitch got to know the bus on a very personal level... hahahahahah LOVED IT!!

Hahah I loved this chapter delayed reaction I know :)

“Woman always say they love a man in uniform, but when I go clubbing in my McDonalds outfit no-one will even talk to me,” Tommy interjected. The dude is seriously my favorite.
Cute moment between the two. Too bad it took a gun going off. haha

OH HOLY FUCKING SHIT BALLS!!! THANK GOD FOR TOMMY!!! I was sitting here laughing my ass off at his awesome comments like: “There’s a fine line between wearing make-up and looking like Crayola gang banged your face,” and all those other funny lines and then BANG!! the orange had a gun i wanna know who the little shit is that keep telling the orange where they are and shit like that... waaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh

I really love this!

I laughed myself to tears with those jokes. Tommy is great!
Eerie ending there.

“Zacky’s moping like a kid that got a Barbie for Christmas,” hahah aawe jimmy is so funny <3
so much tension going on between zee and vannah now though and was it gena that texted?? shiiiiit, bitch be crazy LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE it as always!!!!!!!

So many feelings in this chapter! 0.o

Loved it <3