Through the Window - Comments

I read all four chapters and I have to say that was just amazing. The fact it's a guy who wants to commit suicide makes it more realistic. I've been looking tofind and read a story with this thought and I finally found it through comment swap, do you believe it? I realized at the end of every chapter you make me want to read more and more. It's a shame it only has four chapters cause I would love to read more so I'm subscribing. :) You better start writing more and share your interesting imagination with all of us. :) Well done! Keep up the great work. :)

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I read all four chapters and I have to say that I loved this. It's refreshing to read from a popular guy's point of view. I love Chase's thoughts. They're very relatable. I also like the length of the chapters. They're perfect. I'll definitely be subscribing. Great work!

This is really good. I remember thinking like that awhile back. Can't wait for the next update.

No, I liked the update. Especially because is pretty realistic.

I think the tone of the chapter was just fine! I liked getting to know more about Chase and the reasoning behind his wanting to jump. Can't wait to see where this goes!

This story is AH-MAZ-ING and I really can't wait to find what happens next

I really like your writing style :3
I think it gets people into your story much more.

The layout is simple and nice, and I like the banner a lot.

I subscribed :3

What the fuck is wrong with you? YOU ONLY HAVE THREE CHAPTERS AND YOU LEAVE YET ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER AT THE LAST ONE WITHOUT ANOTHER ONE TO FOLLOW AFTER? WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME? I THOUGHT WE WERE FRIENDS?

No, seriously, though, please tell me your going to update this eventually. I really want to know how this is going to end and what Kinsey is going to do when she sees Chase plummet to his death.

Don't leave us all hanging, love :) Keep writing these beautiful pieces!

In all honesty, the ending of the first two chapters make me speechless and send chills down my spine. I love the endings you use, they are so perfect and make me want to read more, which is why this comment is so short and shitty: I want to read more!

holy shit nuggets!

What kind of fucking awesome story is this? WHY HAVE I NOT READ THIS BEFORE? HMM? HAVE I TURNED STUPID? Oh, dear; considering how long it took me to see this beautiful, purely amazingness story, I am.

I love the idea. It isn't a girl who wants to commit suicide, it's a boy, which makes the typical cliche of suicide writings more unique. Not to mention, the first chapter really caught my eye and I could not peel away from the screen, even if I wanted to.

It is a great ending to the first chapter; leaving it in a cliffhanger like that. I like how the girl comes to the rescue. Us girls need to stop being the fucking damsel in distress and grow some balls for once...not literally because that would be gross.

This is definitely the most awesomeness story I've read! Of course, your other stories are amazing, too! Don't get me wrong :) I'm going to stop annoying the shit out of you with this insane comment and I'm going to read more before I pee my pants of anxiousness. Tata!

I really like this. There was the perfect amount of background for Chase and yet it was still short. I liked how you wrote about someone who was considered "Popular" and how it was that person who wanted to commit suicide. It gives a different outlook and shows how everyone has problems. I also like the layout since I can't figure out how to make mine function I fully appreciate yours.

I think if you don't continue it i'm going to have to hunt you down and force a pen in your hand. This is beautiful. I love you writing i can't even fault it. I love your layout. I already feel connected to Chase. Which is something special. I love story where i connect to the Characters. I really can't wait for more ~Subscribed.

Gorgeous layout. So simple, but absolutely lovely.

The summary was really interesting too. It really caught my attention and made me want to know what that person said that was so important.

Kinsey's house had four fucking floors, and I was at the top. - I personally feel like "fucking" shouldn't be there. I think your writing is strong enough, conveying all the right emotions and tones, so you don't need to swear too much. You can over do it, you know?

I never knew, honestly. - that line to me doesn't make any sense. Why is it there? What are you trying to say with it? You never knew she loved you? You never knew you could be so shocked? That you could feel?

It was pretty intense, and like I said, conveyed a lot of strong emotions. It's a powerful start to a story, and with a great style of writing (and no errors in grammar/spelling), I have to congratulate you :)

Damn, I love this haha. I can pretty much say your writing makes me feel like I'm the one standing on that ledge. This story has a lot of detail and feeling!
Chase is a bit of a doucher, but I like it hah. And his sort of cynical humor. Actually I don't know what call it but whatever it is it's got me sold!
And I big bonus, I see no mistakes which is superb. Fantastic writing skills, keep it up!

You put a lot of detail in this, and it made me love it more then possible. I could feel the characters, almost like I was there and ended up getting lost for awhile. The story is unique and so are the character's personalities. I hope you keep it that way! Keep writing!

Wow, I really like this! First of all, I love your layout. It's so simple, but beautiful. Second, I really love the point of view you chose. This is a story that's really different. Your grammar is great, and your writing style is some of the best I've seen on here.

I love your detail. And I love the fact that this is written from a male perspective - I don't find many of those... And Chase is such an interesting character. I feel like I've known a Chase at some point in my life. You write realistically. Props. Keep it up - I'll be waiting for more!

Aw I like it!
I love Chase, honestly. I love bluntness and cockiness and a character who really knows who they are. You explain his feelings and emotions very well and I like how you explain that he can't feel.

I also think its super adorable the way you changed his name around and made him say that "you'll chase me forever" phrase, that was charming..and I love how you made it seem like the first words he had said to her were going to be the last. very creative!

keep it up!

Wow, this is really good. It had a good plot, pace, and grammar. I really like how Chase is like the macho man who doesn't back down on his word and he jumps. I wasn't even expecting that. I like the flashback between him and Kensey.

This is really good and I hope you continue because I'm looking forward to reading more.

"I stopped out of sheer surprise. I never knew, honestly. And for the first time in forever, I felt."
First chapter and I'm already hooked!
Amazing! Keep it up! Subscribing AND reccomending!
It's not like most other styles of writing I've seen, and I really like it. Hope you update soon :)