Just Keep Your Head Above - Comments

I'm suddenly loving the idea of Jack and Piper which is bad because this is an Alex story but Jack is my babe. *smacks own hand with a wooden spoon*

Can I make an assumption about Jack and Mara getting it on though...? Hm.

I like Naked Boy Carter a lot.

Okay, I don't like non-slash OC fic very much, like... at all, ever. But I've only seen good things about this story from readers even pickier than me, so I figured I'd give it a shot! The first chapter is great already, it feels like a movie or something.

I NEED YOU TO UPDATE THIS NOW OKAY PLEASE I AM BEGGING YOU

cries forever
please sarah

SINGS YOU SHOULD UPDATE

I will kill you if you don't update this is my plea

So I just started reading this today okay and finished it and then I saw that you haven't updated this in like, a year!?!!?!? IF YOU DON'T UPDATE I WILL REVOLT. THERE WILL BE A GOD DAMN UPRISING YOU HEAR ME!?!

omg im gonna keep commenting so i may catch your attention? oh god sigh im actually gonna stop now and pray another chapter will come out before i go to college *keeps holding on. because we are gonna make it through make it through* *also the jonas brothers hold on song* *idek what is this anymore* *update, ill keep my creys and give them to you as a nice lil present* *k bai* *this has turned exceptionally weird and the "*"'s dont make sense anymore* *i love you* sorry

DOOD

I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH and you are such a fantastic writer. I love they way you slowly developed alex and pipes' relationship/friendship/hateship(?) and all your oc's are so great and they are so likeable. Aswell as they way you wrote Alex, Jack, Rian and Zack.

And let me tell you, this story is hilarious. HILARIOUS (lets pretend that was in italics instead of all caps k? k).

The point here is: I love this fic and i think you are super talened and im too emotionally invested in you story to stop now so please please please update soon

*comments bc morgan freeman*

Expectquick updates my ass lol:p

gOD i miss this so much please update soon.

Pleaseupdatethisisthebeststoryiveeverreadandifidontreadmoreillcryoopstoolate

liTERALLY SCREAMING BRO WTF

SIX MONTHS?!?!?!?!?!???!?!?!!! IM FUCKING CRYING SARAH IM LITERALLY BAWLING YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU BUT OH MY GOD.

sometimes i think about how this hasnt updated in like six months and i get sad

I'M GOING TO START THROWING PUNCHES (i have this problem where i get irl sad because a fic hasn't updated and i also want to throw everyones intestines out of a car window so please i'm trying to keep my sanity) PLeasE

What the hell Sarah, where's the update?