Just Keep Your Head Above - Comments

Okay, I wanted to wait until I finished every chapter before commenting. So here it goes. First of all, it usually is hard for me to find a really good fic that pulls me in right away and is just really interesting and your story is just so damn good! From the first chapter to the next, to the next! I wish I was Piper! She just seems so cool. I really love the character you built in her. I love the band and the back and forth from like to hate between Alex and Piper. It's just great and I hope you update soon because I would just jump for joy haha. So get busy girl! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON :)

I adore this story. I love your writing style and the length of these chapters. Please update soon.

GAHHHH GDSJKFHGDSKLDFJGDKSLA;DKMFNJD IT'S SO LOVELY AND YOU WRITE SO WELL AND I LOVE IT LOTS AND ADJFGUDSOKDLFGJ. (sidenote- i just killed a huge ass bug that was on the computer screen and it scared the hell out of me). Also, I really want some pumpkin pie now so thanks a lot :P. But seriously, I'm crazy stoked for more <3

GOD BLESS YOUR SOUL FOR UPDATING THIS. OMFG.

OH MY GOD SARAH YOU UPDATED YOU WONDERFUL HUMAN BEING YOU, I swear to god I nearly had a heart attack. This chapter is fab, lovely!

MY FEELS YOU UPDATED FUCK YES.
Can you tell that I'm excited right now?

When i saw that youupdated i cried. Real talk.

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING. YOU FUCKING BEAUTIFUL PERSON!!!!!

NO YOU CANT JUST LEAVE ME WITH THAT YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON OK? ALSO I LOVE YOU.

as soon as i got an email telling me this was updated i knew i could trust again.

this was perf, thank you! x

Okay so - 1. Welcome back. 2. I've missed this. 3. I really love this still. 4. I will (Im)paitently been awaiting your next update. And finally, 5. I'm pretty sure I'm only commenting for the "Because Miley Cyrus" link. I love that bitch!

And a in non-list and more descriptive means of feedback - I really hope Piper starts to really consider being friends with Alex. He seems to really be trying. And the whole "Prince Charming" thing was adorable. I kinda wish he ended up in a physical altercation with one of the "Dicks" to really show how he had Piper's back. Maybe next time? Haha. And... Jack's innocent attempt to get her to drink was perfect. Ugh. Love this!

Has it really been 3 months?! Crazy!

I just have to say that I definitely threw my hands up an starting cheering when Alex saved Piper from the two guys at the bar... I think I'm emotionally invested in this story again. Please don't leave my feels for 3 more months. :(

This made me so happy to see that it was finally updated!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH and I'm so excited to read on!! UPDATE SOON PLEASEEEEEE

OH MY GOD I AM SO GLAD YOU UPDATED THIS HAS MADE MY WEEK OH MY GOD UPDATE SOON

THIS IS MY FAVOURITE FIC EVER AND I WOKE UP THIS MORNING AND ALLTIMEFANFICTION ON TUMBLR SAID IT HAD BEEN UPDATED. I ACTUALLY SCREAMED. THAT WAS AMAZING, OMG. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Thank you for updating, I have really missed this!

Damn girl, I knew what I was talking about when I said the next chapter would be worth the wait! Although, to be honest, I was busy myself and I didn't even realised it'd been 3 months since you last updated. Which is kind of good because I'm sure it'd kill me to count the days till the next chapter :D
And yeah, you could say I was really happy to see you've updated and I just want to say it's amazing as always but I'll try to give you a detailed comment like I usually do, okay?
So, let's start from the beginning with Linda and that underaged kid wanting a beer. That was simply hilarious because sure, I'd expect her to do something like that, infering from your previous descriptions of her, and yet it took me by surprise a little bit, which is something I really enjoy about your writing :)
What's next? Oh yeah, Piper and those 2 idiots moment. Is it bad that I liked the fact Alex popped out there like Prince Charming? Because I was like 'okay, Linda will step in any minute now' and then, boom and Alex's there to the rescue. And not only once during the chapter, but twice! Even though I felt kinda sorry for him when Piper flinched after he leant agains her in the last scene. However, Piper's finally giving in in this whole 'being friends with Alex' thing, yay!
And my last pleased words go out to none other than Jack because seriously, he was so damn adorable acting all innocent while trying to make Piper have a drink. Probably the cutest part of this chapter!
Okay, I probably got carried away a little bit now :D But once again, I'm glad you took the time to write this! :)

I screamed when I saw this had been updated, not going to lie, probably not the best course of action on a bus...

Aaaah, I'm so happy that you finally updated! I loved this chapter, darlin. Don't apologize for not having time, everyone knows it's hard during the school year.