The Quiet Things That No One Ever Knows - Comments

  • noro

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    @ MCRLUCY
    Haha that's so amazing. I have a friend like that, too, though we do flirt quite a bit. He's nineteen and I'm eighteen, though, so we still have a ways to go in terms of families and everything but yes we get along like that as well.

    and I know, I write on this story mostly early in the mornings so I know there probably is typos and punctuation issues. Whenever I write I just write. A lot. But yes, thank you so much. I'm so happy you enjoy it!
    February 21st, 2013 at 11:17am
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    Just got up to chapter 3. I don't wish to condone the use of drugs but reading chapter 2, especially (and the start of chapter 3) really reminded me so much of me and my best friend, Ben. We're 33 and 34 now and our two 3 year old daughters are the best of friends but 15+ years ago, we spent many an afternoon after school and most of our weekends together. We used to hang out at our local nature reserve, Rough Wood and other quiet, unused woodland areas smoking joints and/or drinking god awful cider or, if we were lucky, Ben used to sometimes get hold of his Dad's Macallan whiskey. I was sooooooo in love with him but at the same time, I'm glad we never REALLY got together. We've been best friends ever since and meet up once a week so the girls can play but so we can catch up too. We have pretty much everything in common but but we certainly don't need drugs to get on with eachother now.

    There's a few little typos and punctuation issues BUT it's nothing that distracts from the story. I really like this.
    February 21st, 2013 at 10:41am
  • noro

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    @ kakeaney
    Aww thank you so much! I'm glad you're in love with it, as I am too.
    I will update soon, promise.

    @ MCRLUCY
    Always, always great to have a new tumblr friend.
    February 21st, 2013 at 10:14am
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    @ hunter eyes;
    I can't wait to read more and yes, it's great to have a new tumblr friend!
    February 21st, 2013 at 09:02am
  • noro

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    Aww thank you so much! I'm glad you're in love with it, as I am too.
    I will update soon, promise.
    February 21st, 2013 at 06:07am
  • kayk33

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    I just found this and am in love with it! Evan <3
    please update soon :)
    February 21st, 2013 at 06:06am
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    @ MCRLUCY
    Haha thanks so much I'm so glad you liked it! I noticed you followed me on tumblr, too, so thanks for that as well (: If you read the other chapters, you'll learn a lot about Evan (:
    February 21st, 2013 at 05:00am
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    I've only just found this story and after reading chapter 1, I know I'm going to love it. Very well written; love the "english-ness" of the dialogue between Ella and Joseph. It's JUST the right length and is s great introduction to the main charachters. I like the brief mention of Evan too at the end; just leaves us wanting to read more to find out who he is and what he's like. I'm also loving it because my Sister's name is Ella.
    February 20th, 2013 at 12:43pm
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    @ ShanaeNayy
    Thank you so much! I just returned to mibba after another hiatus that I wind up going on when I have bad writer's block, so coming back to this after the past month (give or take a little) made my heart sing. I'm so glad you enjoy this story, as I do too.
    February 20th, 2013 at 10:00am
  • ShanaeNayy

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    I'm here from the comment swap and thank God they sent me this way. I didn't know what to expect when I clicked open the first chapter, but I think that's a good thing. I feel that a lot of people get caught up in the magic of fan fiction, the amazing world they can create when they have control over details and situations, that people forget the magic of real life. That's where your writing gives us. It's a like a glimpse into a diary where real life is raw and funny and heart breaking and better than what can be imagined. Your style is refreshing and personal, it brings the reader into an authentic world worth reading and careing about.
    February 15th, 2013 at 07:54pm
  • BabiiDoll103

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    Moooooore.
    Update soon. Plz? :)
    November 6th, 2012 at 09:04am
  • noro

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    @ BabiiDoll103
    Haha for sure of course!
    just sometime tomorrow/within the next two days. I'm looking forward to writing about it, some big plans and CHANGES are going to happen ;3
    October 12th, 2012 at 12:55pm
  • BabiiDoll103

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    sitting on the edge of my seat. more more more more more.
    Pleaseeee?
    =)
    October 12th, 2012 at 11:09am
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    ~From comment swap:

    My only issue with the first chapter is that you switch from the past tense to the present tense. In the second chapter, you're a bit repetitive like in teh first paragraph you use the verb 'laid' several times. Grammatically speaking, I'm pretty sure it's supposed to be lay. Things lie/lay/laid; People lie/lay/have lain. But other than this, this is a nicely written story. I hope you continue to write.
    September 6th, 2012 at 09:53am
  • BabiiDoll103

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    Update soon please. :)
    September 3rd, 2012 at 11:50pm
  • noro

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    @ BabiiDoll103
    Aw thank you so much! I love that you love my story, C: you're like the only one that comments on it, and just for that I am so appreciative.
    September 3rd, 2012 at 07:53am
  • BabiiDoll103

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    Love. Love. Love. Love
    Update soon. Please.
    This story is amazing.
    September 3rd, 2012 at 06:38am
  • BabiiDoll103

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    @ hunter eyes;
    I know how that goes. Lol
    August 29th, 2012 at 07:38pm
  • noro

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    @ BabiiDoll103
    most soi-tenly, I've been very out of it, though, and I've been having some trouble with writer's block haha
    August 29th, 2012 at 12:11pm
  • BabiiDoll103

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    more more more more more more more!
    XD
    Please???
    August 29th, 2012 at 09:27am