The Quiet Things That No One Ever Knows - Comments

I loved the update.
I can't wait to see more of Joey coming out in the story, his reactions to Elle.
Soo excited to know more about all the characters.
Keep up the awesome work! =)

@ Fee-hee-hee-heeny!
Aww thank you so much! I'm so very glad and thankful that you like it :)

Comment Swap! :) I have to say that my favorite part of this story is the dynamic between Elle and Margo. I like that Elle likes her instead of being all, "My mom left my dad and now he's married to some ho 20 years his junior and she'll never be my mom ever so let's hate her for no reason!" I always see that in stories and I'm glad I didn't see it here. I also love the friendship between her and Joey; I feel like that's sort of the same kind of friendship that my best friend (who I have feelings for, since he is also my ex), have, so I have relate. :) Really, really great story. I also like how there's a small drug usage aspect in here but you don't make it all about that, you know, like, DRUGS DRUGS DRUGS DRUG IT UP EVERY WORD OF EVERY CHAPTER, YO.

Haha, I'm sorry, I hope I'm making sense here. tl;dr? I love it; subbing and recc'ing, keep it up. :)

Comment Swap here

First thing i noticed, your layout is really appealing. And you grammar is really nice, it gets hard to find stories with proper sentence structure sometimes and you are very well developed.
The story is really great, and hard to stop reading.
Keep Writing :)

@ Wishful. Thinker.
I don't get what's so confusing about it? I've read over everything and from what I've caught, it all seems like it's past tense. It's kinda hard to fuck up writing past tense in first person, so if I did then fuck I'm dumb. But anyway, thanks so much! <3

@ KilljoyBekah
Thanks so much! I'm so very glad that you like it. And this isn't a fanfiction but LOL I think you meant fiction. I love writing, so of course I'll keep writing on it.

This is a great story, I haven't read a lot of orginal Fanfictions for some reason. But this is great. You have great writing and your characters seem pretty well developed so far. I've been trying to come up with a good story of my own, as I want to do my own orginal, so I admire you for being able to do it so well. Keep writing!

Comment Swap:

Hey so I actually enjoyed this story, and I loved the fact it was an original fiction :) your spelling was pretty much perfect from what I read, and the way you write was only a little confusing (as in, I’m not sure if it’s present or past tense some times) but apart from that, it’s an amazing read and I hope you continue to write it! :)

@ hunter eyes;
Yay!!!! I look forward to reading it.

@ BabiiDoll103
Haha thanks so much! Of course there'll be more, especially another chapter today. (:

I hope joey feels the same for her. especailly being her good friend and pretty much keeping her sane lol. MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!! =D Please?

@ casserby-x
Thank you so, so much. It really means a lot that you like it so much. And of course I'm developing Joey and the father's relationship as well. Thank you so much for the feedback and the criticism.

@ symphony.of.freaks
Yes, I am currently working on some more background, haha, thanks so much for your feedback. I really do appreciate it <3 I'm also going to work in about her mother some more, like a dream or something. Just wait and see (:

I don't even know what to say. This story is really good. I like the feel of how it's almost like a story to Joey and it sounds really sweet.
I like your writing style and how you form your sentences. I'm glad Comment Swap gave me your story because it just seems really sweet and calm. I can't wait to get to know the characters more. I really want to know Joey a little more though. And the relationship tie with the father. Like what or when did the father exactly start hating him and such.
Ella seems like a normal girl but I feel like there is something hiding behind her and I just really want to know more. Keep up the good work. :)

I think I could end up loving this story, as I already really like it! Some suggestions though, maybe work some of her background into the story, like if trying weed is so much out of her comfort zone then give a flashback-type story or two of how she'd always been a "good girl" and whatnot. Also, maybe try to describe the emotions attached to why she tried it (I'm guessing because of her family situation and the fact that she really likes Joey played a part in it). The story is really good so far anyways, but I did the same thing as Ella and thought you might like some constructive suggestions :) Please update soon!

@ BabiiDoll103
Aw, thanks so much! Glad you like it.

Thank you to the people who have read this lol

More?
It's good so far. i wanna know more about Ell!! =)
And the meaning with the title...and the guy.