Dogfight - Comments

It's... it's over... AND IT WAS BEAUTIFUL. T.T
OH MY. I AM JUST. IN SHOCK. BUT IN A BEAUTIFUL SHOCK. BECAUSE DID I MENTION THIS STORY IS BEAUTIFUL?

I feel like they've grown so much since the beginning and now look at them they're all adults and responsible and going to school and doing things with their lives and being successful and I'm just. Tears. Tears everywhere. THEY'VE BEEN ON SUCH A BEAUTIFUL JOURNEY. And for like the millionth time oh my they are just the most adorable couple in the world. And they still call each other asshole. Which just makes them cuter. Which I didn't think was possible, and then you did it, and then I died and had to come back to life just to tell you how cute they are.

It was honestly the perfect ending (still tears of J.C. though, but he gave Renny a second chance and oh gosh tears) and I am caught between sadness that it's over and I love this story and your writing and these characters and it's sad to see them go but also awe and happy because it was so happy and they're doing so well and they're happy and you just did such an amazing awe. I am bowing to you. Because this and you are so awesome.

This is easily one of my favourite stories EVER and this will always have a place in my heart. This is just perfect and this whole story is perfect and I can't believe I CAN'T LEAVE MY DUMB RAMBLES ON IT ANYMORE. SO LET THIS BE THE DUMBEST AND RAMBLIEST FOR OLD TIMES SAKE. BECAUSE I LOVE THIS STORY.

If that wasn't clear or anything.
Just perfect.

Awwwwh I'm gonna miss these boys! I'm so glad they're both happy though. I couldn't have pictured a better ending for those two ❤️

Yay I'm so happy you finished this story. But so sad to say goodbye to these characters too. This was a really beautiful story!

It's nice and sad to see this story completed but it was great to be along for the ride!

SO SAD THIS HAS ENDED :'(

I didn't want their story to end yet it seemed like the perfect time for it to ; - ;

I cried a bit. I'm going to miss this story

I come back and thank god I did because holy man, ACTION. ACTION EVERYWHERE. AND I MISSED THEM.

First of all, how could I have temporarily forgotten how damn adorable Renny is, oh my god. JUST. THE. CUTEST. EVERYTHING ABOUT HIM. I JUST WANT TO PINCH HIS CHEEKS. When he was all skippy in front of Nelson I was just like all the z-snaps to you, my dear friend, you get all of them. Just so cheeky and adorable why are you fighting Renny no, let me hug you, shhh, be safe.

Also, DAMN BLAKE, YOU KICKING ASS. And the kissing in the middle of a huge shit storm, ONLY THEM. I am just, I'm dying over here. From how great they are. "I've been in worse" you guys are going to die you little cocky adorable sons of bitches. I love them. They're great. And this is. A+'s to everyone.

Oh my god nooo, noooooo, who brings a gun to a knife fight? The worst kind of people. Which is what Nelson is. Nooooooo.

CLIFFHANGERS. NOOO. On the brightside, there's another chapter, because I'm a terrible Mibbian so it has it's perks. :3 But also NOOOOO. NO BODIES HITTING THE FLOOR. Although that did make me think of that song. But mostly NOOOOO.

J.C.
Okay so Nelson has to die that's it that's the only conclusion he is the worst and does not deserve to live the little shit. No, I changed my mind, Renny is right, let him rot forever because he is the worst.

Oh my god nooo, that's so sad, "where his life ended my began" like noooooooooooooooooo, beautifully written of course as always my heart is crying but in the best way because you are the best and this is the best. It makes me sad that it's almost over but ALL AMAZING THINGS MUST COME TO AN END.
Can't wait! :3

Leave it to me to find an awesome story on the second to last chapter.

JC OH MY GOD NOOO!!! Like i guessed it would be either him or Renny but ugh I so wasn't ready for it I FORGOT TO PREPARE MYSELF BEFORE READING

I'm going to miss the shit out of these boys. It breaks my heart that JC had to die, but at least his death brought about some closure for our boys. Gah, I can't believe this is ending. I hope you plan on starting a new story or two in the future! ❤️

WHY DOES THIS HAVE TO END SO SOOOOOON

Interesting twist

So I wasn't expecting JC to be the one who was shot. D: And I'm gonna cry so much next chapter. I really love your writing so I hope you start writing again after this, but if not that's cool too. I really enjoyed this story and I'm excited but sad for the final chapter!

I just.... My.... But.... MY BABY YOU KILLED MY PRECIOUS JC!!!! Dx the feels are real man
When I first saw the update I was super excited and like yeah! Some happy doghouse time! Nope. That was not happy time at all. Quite the opposite. Welp.

Regardless, the chapter was amazing as always xP

Cliffhanger why!?!?!

I am absolutely speechless....

Four months and you leave us with a cliff hanger? Are we atleast getting the next one soon?

w...t.......f?!

7 months and then that kind of cliffhanger!?!??!??!!!?!??!!