Dogfight - Comments

OH MT GOD YES BUT OH MY GOD SAD BUT LIKE YES FOR UPDATE! WOOH!! I've missed these boys!

I saw this updated and I couldn't believe my eyes! I did like a forty take just to make sure! Such a sad chapter though! I can't wait for the next one?

Sooooo I'll be honest here and say that I didn't read the last two chapters before you went on a super extended vacation from this fic but oh my god am I glad you and this story are back you are amazinggggg I think I'll go back and re read the whole thing again just for fun cause I love it so much :)

YAAAAY YOU'RE BAAAAACCCKKKK!!!!!!!

I miss this story.

This is like super good I really hope you update soon ):

Are you done writing this? (as you know I suck at updating so I understand if you don't but I'm just curious if you are going to continue it)

I just want to read something of yours and I already read all of your other stories! Dx

Lmfao. Virgins write the best smut though, and fifty shades of grey is not wonderful at all! xD and also, I completely avoid writing sex scenes...haha! Wonderful though! Love this story still!

Due to my absence I haven't really been reading at all on Mibba but I finally found some time and knew that I needed to catch up on this story and so I completely devoured ALL THE CHAPTERS THAT I MISSED and now I am BATHING IN ALL THE EMOTIONS THAT I FORGOT ABOUT BECAUSE RENNY AND BLAKE AND UGH. THEM. TOGETHER. BOYS. WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME?

First of all- boy I think I LOVE. THAT HAPPENED. DON'T DENY IT. IT HAPPENED.

Oh my god that entire fight I was completely on edge like omg no blake no my baby no don't get hurt NO NO NO NO. You, my friend, are just excellent at writing action scenes I'm not sure if I mentioned that before but the way you describe it and the perfect balance of verbs and imagery it's all so vivid in my head you are so good at that, oh my god, but it HURT MY HEART BECAUSE UM BLAKE NO STOP THAT. It's adorable the thought but noooooo don't get hurt. As soon as the knife came I was like nopenopenopenopenopenopenopeDOESNOTCOMPUTESTOPTHATNOPE my breath literally started to shorten I was so scared for him. D:

I CAN'T BELIEVE RENNY WAS STABBED AGAIN- ADORABLE HE SAVED HIM BUT NOPE NO MY BABIES ARE HURT.

Actually I need to cut in again wow you are legitemately such a good writer like every chapter I am just astounded I mean the vocab you use is perf with just the right amount of everything sprinkled in to create this perfect harmony of a masterpiece of your writing. Like, instead of just bland simple this is what happened you just add this perfect spark that brings all your writing to life and wow actually I love it and I just needed to add that in amid my freak out over the fantastic plot line of this fantastic story.

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG. THEY KISSED. THERE WAS LIP TO LIP CONTACT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I FUCKING KNEEEEEEW IT OH MY GOD I AM SO HAPPY I KNEW IT AND IT WAS HIS FIRST KISS AND ALL THESE EMOTIONS I CANNOT CONTAIN THEM BECAUSE WOW OH MY GOD THEY HAVE KISSED I CAN'T I LOVE IT SO MUCH AGH.

THEY KISSED. I AM SO HAPPY. I AM SO VERY HAPPY RIGHT NOW.

He's cooking for him and gah when he hugged him from behind I was like nope nope I'm done you two are too adorable I died from cuteness that is exactly what happened because you guys are so fucking cute.

One of those apron-fetish creepers OF COURSE HE IS RENNY JUST LET IT BE AND WEAR THE APRON.

ahhhh seriously I hope he does stay away DON'T DIE ON ME NOW RENNY YOU CAN'T YOU ADORABLE LITTLE SON OF A BITCH YOU.

Okay I still love Brick also an insane amount he is one of my favourite characters ever he is so cool. And I love how awesome Blake is being about it he's just like YEP I AM DATING RENNY WORLD LOVE IT BECAUSE IT'S STAYING THAT WAY wow I mean he kissed him in public that's huge I am so happy. c:

Also Nelson needs to get out because um no you do not get to insult them like that who are you you are irrelevant psht.

WHAT TIME SKIP? Lugging bricks around with Brick I love that so much oh my god. Them together just everything they say and I'm like wow I love you guys so much this is honestly one of my favourite stories on this site ever I love them and them doing things and wow I can't seriously they are just the best, okay? And I totally think of them with American accents though because I am American, haha. :3

Okay Blake being nervous before sexytime just made me so happy because aww look at him being so fucking adorable ugh I hate them for being so perfect but I love them at the same time I know these comments do not make any sense but shh. OKAY WOW DID YOU JUST SAY THAT YOU WERE UNSURE IF YOU COULD WRITE SEXYTIME IN THE LAST CHAPTER BECAUSE UM THAT SEXY TIME WAS AMAZING OH MY GOD. THAT WAS SO GOOD. I CAN'T EVEN.
Do not ever doubt your sexytime writing abilities okay because it was awesome.

Everyone about this story is just ugh so amazing and I totally wrote like a novel in this comment and I'm sorry but I JUST HAVE SO MUCH TO EXPRESS BECAUSE THIS STORY IS JUST SO AWESOME OKAY? OKAY I LOVE IT AND YOU BYE.

This is the cutest thing in the world I want to wrap Blake, Renny, and Brick in a big ole hug (((:

I hope you're able to update this soon.
The boys are so cute together, honestly I love this.
Don't worry bout the sex so much, if the actual story is good, which it is, the sex doesn't matter so much :-)

I love your story, and a lake and Renny are so fucking adorable!! If you're still weirded out by the sex scene, just think about rainbows and butterflies, Lol. Please keep updating, though, I look forward to reading your story :)

"I NEVER WRITE SEX SCENES BECAUSE I AM VIRGIN AS FUCK." I feel you. Also, I love this story.

Omg, I love this, I love this, I love this! :3 Don’t worry, you did a good job with the dirty-dirty and I must agree with one of the comments bellow. Your inexperience was actually perfect for this; it made it all seem realistic. When authors used to write smut find themselves in this situation, they always make the characters seem like professionals at what they’re doing. And in here it is not the case at all!! They are so adorably awkward, just how it was to be expected. I was actually giggling so much while reading this, seriously. It was the most perfect sex scene I’ve ever read. So, so, so adorable. *-*

And I have to say this… BLAKE, YOU GOT YOUR BALLS BACK, DUDE! :’D I’m so proud of my baby! He actually made a man out of himself. :’3 And Renny taking is kind of mind-blowing. Poor thing had to succumb to Blake’s sexiness.

You know what just struck me? The thought that I’m going into depression when this is over. It’s like reliving ‘Trash’ all over again. And I hope you remember how much I loved and still love that story. ;-; I want it back so badly! And now this one is already almost 30 chapter in and I feel like it won’t last long until it is over. :’’( so, so sad. I’m so in love with this!

Anyway, update soon! Bring my depression closer!
You’re amazing. :D

<3

Oh my god, Blake was just as awkwardly adorable as all get out at the start of this. Renny's getting all grown up. :D

Babe, still hot as fuck. ;)

For a first timer *cheeky wink* this was a pretty damn good sex scene! Just sayin ;)
Really happy you updated! Love this story <3

No worries, I think you did a wonderful job with this chapter, depsite your, um... inexperience. Lol. It sounded rather wonderful in a realistic way, on that they weren't in that god awful "perfect sync" fictitious couples seem to reach on mibba, but still having pleasureable sex. The only thing I would say is, though, is when thinking of the fact that Renny is (was, now. Teehee) virgin, there is a certain amount of discomfort and soreness he would feel the first time that is a little more intense than the usual female response. Our bums are a little more tight and fragile than the vaginal canal so rough sex- especially the first time- makes it especially easy for something to rip. Just thought I'd point that out. :)

Now that I've been waaaay too serious, can I just say, god I love this couple! So fucking adorable!!

yayyyyyyyyyyyyy they finally butt fucked hahahahahaha

Yay for self-awkwardness! They totally did it, holy shiiiiiiiiiiite c: Waiting for a chapter for so long but totally worth it. They did it! And you made them do it! Hahaha (that wasn't supposed to sound mean if it did)