The Best Mistake - Comments

  • amyuhohs

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    Why does Nash have to get her in trouble? ):
    May 23rd, 2012 at 04:01am
  • Shadow14

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    That was rather stupid of Nash to do. Break into a shop in broad daylight when the owner lives upstairs.. I figured he would have been smarter than that. As for Ashlyn, well, her parents will be pissed and I think it was kind of stupid of her to follow him, but I would have done the same thing.
    May 23rd, 2012 at 03:51am
  • alonginginmybones

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    If only he was paitient...
    May 23rd, 2012 at 03:32am
  • kelly09

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    Wha-ha-hat?! That was unexpected! Wooow...
    May 23rd, 2012 at 03:10am
  • MoMo_92

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    God damnit.... Ash and Nash r goin to jail becuz Nash was being stupid, stealing from an old lady really....can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    May 23rd, 2012 at 01:17am
  • ImJustLaya

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    one more left :(
    but then the sequel! (which i've already subscribed to...)
    But omg omg omg! So Ashlyn's parents will be pisssssed when they find this out. Or maybe not because they aren't like normal parents ? But i really will miss seeing this story name in my email. lol
    May 23rd, 2012 at 12:41am
  • Through-the-Night

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    Well damn. Girlie's gonna get arrested.
    May 23rd, 2012 at 12:38am
  • MusicLover525

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    OHHHHHHHH!! :DD hopefully it's just the old lady and not the police! Maybe the madam will also me that nice to not call the police??? :b
    May 23rd, 2012 at 12:37am
  • TrustInFearx

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    OMG AHHHHH WHERE'S THE HAT?! :'(
    So excited for the next updateeee! (When was I not?)
    Omgggg I'm so scared for the sequel though...the title makes me tremble in fear :-ss
    But nonetheless, I'm stoked.

    Well, I'm currently writing my story, and I've just posted the first two chapters on my other Tumblr, could everyone please give me thoughts about it? I mean, if I should continue it or not. Please check it out! http://dem0litiondarling.tumblr.com/tagged/disenchanted :3
    May 22nd, 2012 at 02:58am
  • thewhorror

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    Doesn't Ashlyn have the hat? :O ahhh!
    May 22nd, 2012 at 01:16am
  • LoveThatsEpic

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    I really like your story! Love Nash, and the way you make him come to life on the page :)
    Keep up the good work! :D

    I am going to (as many other I see) shamelessly promote my own story, so check it out if you want too! :)
    http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/417777/The-Archers-Arrow/

    -LoveThatsEpic
    May 21st, 2012 at 11:24pm
  • katediplodocus

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    I love this soo much, like Nash is exactley the kinda guy I like. Not necessarily good for you but damn well protective. I imagine he'd be the kind of guy that either hates you or loves you, not really anything in between!

    Can I shamelessly promote my own story? I think so... OK, they're mainly fan fictions and idk if you like them.

    But I have --->http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/421861/Say-You-Mean-It/ an All Time Low fic that I quite like, but the updates atm aren't great.

    Oli Sykes fic----> http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/465146/Chelsea-Smile/
    MCR Killjoy Fic ---> http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/341323/Take-No-Prisoners/

    I have some original fictions too, but they don't have as many updates. :D Shameless promotion over.
    May 21st, 2012 at 07:33pm
  • MusicLover525

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    So that's why the hat is that important!! :D I wonder if Ashlyn will go all crazy and look for it?? Ôó 
    May 21st, 2012 at 01:35pm
  • TayVengeance

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    yup. I definitely read this entire story just now. so many feels, you've no idea. like, the feels are just so much. yeah..... .________. awkward.

    buuuuuut, this is so great. I love how real they all are. AND because Nash...... So, this needs to be updated, because Nash needs his fucking hat back, and here come the feels again, and I can't even....

    <3
    May 21st, 2012 at 09:46am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    love.
    May 21st, 2012 at 07:09am
  • charlie smith

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    I actually love your author's notes so much LOL
    Great update, I hope he finds the hat and gets rid of the Russians already!
    May 21st, 2012 at 05:27am
  • ImJustLaya

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    aww, i hope he finds it. :/
    and cant wait till the next update <3
    May 21st, 2012 at 05:17am
  • GrimmOSauris

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    ETF REFRENCE!!! 10 MILES WIDE!!! WOOO!
    May 21st, 2012 at 04:52am
  • KaeBug

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    Go check out my stories!!! Lol i have like 5 maybe? Its a variety so there not all the same type and btw love the story!! (: poor Nash...lost his hat
    May 21st, 2012 at 04:42am
  • horserideraja

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    Looking for stories? I don't post on Mibba anymore but check out my wattpad http://www.wattpad.com/user/horserideraja

    <3

    On the matter of your story....

    Shots gona go down... Don't mess with a bro and his hat....
    May 21st, 2012 at 04:40am