Welcome to the Family - Comments

More soon please

I love that the girls were going along with the twins. I also love that the girls stood up to Logan. So as always a great chapter, keep it up.

Awe love this please update soon

I love that they adopted Jamie as a little brother. This chapter was cute. They're pretty smart with their survival kits. I can't wait for the next update.

update soon please

I love it. I can't wait for more.

Wooooo! more soon please!

@ darkbunny96
Your welcome :D And cant wait to read the update when its updated :D And its fin :)

@ KillJoySynner @ BoyCrazzyEmo2 @ happyamanda
:D Thanks for the comment im going to try and update this as soon as possible :) Sorry its a three in one comment :3

@ skyegirl96
Haha im glad you like it, they react to it in the next chapter I was going to hold it off but I got an Idea and then I was like nope it needs to go in :) Well i going to try and update this soon im just trying to get some of my stories up to ten chapters which I have nearly done and then I think this will most likely be the prioroty story :) Thanks for the comment.

Love it :D

<3 Amanda

Awesome :) update soon plz!

More... more... more!!! please and thank you!:D

I can't wait for the next chapter when the react to the itching powder. I love that they pretended they destroyed the bike. Hilarious.

Oh. My. God. That was so great! I love the twins they are so crazy! I can NOT wait for the next chapter! I am in tears from this chapter.

more soon please love this

update soon plase

Comment swap brought me here! Hm. Okay. I have two things to say to you.

The first thing is that the one girl's name, Shannen, stood out to me simply because my name is Shannon. Haha! Neat.

The other is that there are regretfully a lot of grammar mistakes and improper writing techniques scattered throughout what I'm sure is a charming fic. Simply adding capital letters to start sentences and punctuation to end them would help massively. And try changing those asterisk notations to some kind of explanation from the character who is speaking. I think it would be a great help! :)

:) Another great chapter. And how do you pronounce Josh's name, to me he is always known as "Josh from You Me At Six"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing! Loved it. Cant wait to see what happens wen the twins open up. Cant wait for next update :)