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  • Star Angel

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    love this please update soon
    May 16th, 2012 at 08:53am
  • JellyBeans1666

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    Wow. Another great chapter as usual. I was trying to read this on my iPod while also trying to tie my tie one handed for school. Loving the fact that the twin can talk in their heads to each other. Please update soon, it makes me smile. :)
    May 16th, 2012 at 08:26am
  • JellyBeans1666

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    This made my day (as I feel like absolute shit from a cold) And I know what you mean with the whole 'eat more than a fat, starving man and still be hungry' as my mum was amazed when I told her I could eat 2 Big Mac's. Thank for mentioning me in A/N
    May 9th, 2012 at 08:39am
  • Star Angel

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    more love this lol my butt off
    May 3rd, 2012 at 08:43am
  • JellyBeans1666

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    They're going against Jimmy and Leana already! Still great as ever. I can't really think of anything else to comment but I commented anyway. Keep up the writing. Thanks for mentioning me in you A/N and I hope my comments are helping. :)
    May 1st, 2012 at 08:17pm
  • JellyBeans1666

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    Wow!!! You're doing great and I like the fact that you have achieved what I said in my last comment and that you just putting capital letters at the start and full stops at the end of sentences has improved your story loads. I like the fact that they is not many stories out like yours as I like it when I'm left to guess what is happening next. I really like that the girls tricked the guys in to thinking they had no idea who they are. Keep writing I really love your story so far and can't wait for future chapters.
    April 30th, 2012 at 08:41pm
  • darkbunny96

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    Yeah I know thanks for telling me its cause im crap at remembering to add them when i write i just go of into my own world so stuff like that just gets forgotten.
    March 30th, 2012 at 10:33am
  • JellyBeans1666

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    mosher123 recommended that I read some of your stories. It's great and different to most (Which I find is great) but you are not using capital letters at the start of sentences and arn't full stopping them either.
    March 29th, 2012 at 12:58am