Great story! It's not too heavy but your alluring writing made me cant stop reading it! I love it, but I think you put the story under the wrong rating. It's shoul've been rated R or NC17 :)
when I saw that this was the last chapter I was surprised and sad but then I saw there was sequel and I'm happy again :) so, the ending was really cute between Trim and Ambi, they're adorable <3 I hope that they can stay in touch. I really liked this story overall. It was wonderful. I'm super glad that there's a sequel which I will subscribe to after I finish this comment :) Keep up the awesome writing!! <3
OH MY GOD TRIM AND AMBI.<3 Trim is such a sweetheart, honestly. I wish I had myself a Trim :c he's literally perfect. he's so sweet and kind and caring and funny and so perfect and UGH Y CAN'T TRIM BE IN MI LYF Y please update soon.
D': that was a terrible ending... </3 hopefully Trim can help comfort Ambi...She needs him the most now... I really want Rico to disappear... I somehow think that that's not the end of the talk of Rico&Ambi's relationship.. please update soon! <333
ohmygosh. I'm in love with this story <3 I love Trim :) he's so sweet and he sounds really attractive ;) I think that Ambi should tell him about what happened with Rico...sure he'll be really upset when he finds out but I think it'll be the best in the long run... Rico really annoys me...He needs to lay off. I get that he likes her and everything and I was waiting for him to tell her that he liked her but he shouldn't have kissed her when she said that she had a boyfriend.. please update soon! <333
Whoa Whoa Whoa, Rewind! Did he just....it can't be....Rico likes Ambi?haha Really deep down I expected it but I was still taken by surprise. I'd just go and spill it to Trim now. He should know.
Also, Rico really pisses me off. Like why Winnie? My respect towards Ambi has grown. She could've kicked him in the nads and I'd have been okay with it. Anyhoo, UPDATE NOW.......................or later, of course.:)
YOU GO, AMBI YOU GO GIRL! YOU TURN RICO DOWN. I'm very happy that Rico's finally getting shut down, that asshole deserves it! poor Winnie :c please update soon!
TRIM FAKSDJFHCAKLJSDBHCKLJAHWLEKJRFHALKSDJFHLKAJWHELKAFSDLKCHAKLJEHFKLJASHDCHASLKDJFHLAKJSEF EXCUSE ME WHILE I'M FANGIRLING UGH JESUS oh my gosh so I've kinda just been thinking that Trim's sweet and all, but he doesn't take girls seriously but after this chapter after this chapter. I'm in love with Trim. I really am. he and Ambi are so precious. I hope all goes well when he meets her mom :c