Summer With the Bertram Brothers - Comments

Oh my gosh!! There are no words.. Lol this is why I like Trim.. Lol he's so.. Lol gentle? with Ambi.. I can't wait for an update!! :)

Aww!! I hope she settles with Trim! <3 and I hope that Trim won't leave her now! :/

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HIS COCK MUST BE HUGE.
GOODNESS.
I frigging love Trim.
He and Ambi are so sweet, whilst Rico's just kind of an asshole to her.
BUT UGH.
this chapter made my day!
please update soon!

oh my god how big is his cock.
how big is Trim's cock.
after this chapter, I'm starting to like Trim more...
Eva still bothers me, even though she was giving Ambi some, "sisterly advice," even though it was absolute shit.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON(:

I love this!! I hate Rico.. lol I like that Eva took on that big sister role.. I liked it lol can't wait for the update.. :)

NOOOO!! Go away Rico! I want Trim and Ambi to be together!! >.< She better tell BOTH boys.. men what's going on right now! She can't keep playing if she doesn't want to end up like her sister! >:[

ok, I love this story lol. And thats a terrible predicament she's in with Trim and Rico =/ She should have been honest and told Trim though so it doesnt come back and bite her in the butt! :(

ok, I love this story lol. And thats a terrible predicament she's in with Trim and Rico =/ She should have been honest and told Trim though so it doesnt come back and bite her in the butt! :(

ok, this is nit picky, but ch3, only about 2 paragraphs space down, you say 360, and unless she spun in a circle it'd be 180 lol. I'm sorry! I'm loving the story so far though (: It's nice writing.

There no words for how I feel. Haha OMG! This was.. Ahhhh... I don't know!! I just.. No friggin' words..
The only words are.. UPDATE SOON!! :D

OH MY GOD
OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD
I'm seriously freaking out here like
what just happened
MAMA AMBI
Y U INTERRUPT THEIR SWEET NON-SEX SEX?!
seriously I can't get over this.
why did she interrupt that.
WHY.
please update soon oh my gosh
it'll be so awks with Trim and Rico.
especially after this.

Aww!! See, I knew I loved Trim for a reason! ;)

ugh I honestly don't know who I love after this chapter
I love Rico so much, but Trim is beautiful and sweet and mysterious askjaskdjghlaksjdhlkfjl
WHY MUST YOU DO THIS.
SERIOUSLY?
ARGH.
I'm gonna cry!
please update soon!

Trim is my favorite! I just hope she will end up with him! Rico seems to always get the attention; I think Trim deserves some credit! :)

I think I'd pick Trim for sure. There's something about that.. I don't know.. Quiet type? I guess.. Haha But I'd pick Trim over Rico any day..
I think it's funny that Eva and Winnie are after Rico, when he only has eyes for Ambi.. Ahh.. Nothing like the best friend and sister against each other and stuff.. :D
I think a good song would be Sons of Annie Jones by Birds or anything by Grouplove or Ritual Union by Little Dragon.. :D You're welcome..
Update soon!!! :D

UGH, WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?!
It's so difficult to pick between Trim and Rico, but of I honestly had to decide which team I was on, I'd say Rico, just because.
AND WINNIE'S REALLY BOTHERING ME.
SHE'S SO NAÏVE, UGH.
She needs to get her head out of the clouds and realise that Rico is after Ambi.
smh at dis bitch.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON, this story is so amazing, oh my goodness. (:

This is so great! I love this story, I love the way you write! Keep it up, I'm excited to read more!! :)

I just caught up.. like always I loved the music.. and the story of course!!! Doyle and Eva are 100% jerks and the Bertram brothers are amazing.. ;) update soon!!!! :)

I don't like Doyle. or Eva. I just hate her siblings and stuff. AND THIS CHAPTER
HAD COUGH SYRUP
I LOVE YOU
okay
um
Rico sounds amazingly hot
just saying.
please update soon?

The siblings are stupid! :( did something happened to the mother? Ôó AND she should have come out with Trim! Would have explained it all to Rico!