You said hurt twice within two paragraphs. It may sound superficial but it's really obvious when you read it. I saw now at one point in the story however I cannot find it. I saw it in another story too, so it might have just been a mixed up thought in my head. Your story is amazing though and I'm glad that you appreciate my comment; I did not intend to insult you in any way.
April 1st, 2012 at 02:27am