Breaking the Pact of Bat Country - Comments

JOhnny just needs to get over the fact that she doesnt want him any more....like i think he still is hung up that's why he always brings back the past to hurt her more like he is feeling and how he brings up the guy code and shit but it's liek he does need to get over it beacuse it's not good on Bailey to have him always bringing up the past when they are together.

JOhnny just needs to get over the fact that she doesnt want him any more....like i think he still is hung up that's why he always brings back the past to hurt her more like he is feeling and how he brings up the guy code and shit but it's liek he does need to get over it beacuse it's not good on Bailey to have him always bringing up the past when they are together.

im still rooting for brian to be the dad only because she had more sex with brian then johnny since johnny is an asshat for thinkin that she is still his...but yay her and brian are haing a girl...im so nervous when they tell matt

@ Spiralling Shape
haha. well, thank you.

I've definitely been in a rough patch. like I just keep getting lost/bored and don't know what I want to happen/when. blah! but yes... it is and it's all about to come a crumblin' down.

I'm so glad you're back! Great update, although it's such a tough spot for all of them to be in. Can't wait for more!

I'm so glad you're back! Great update, although it's such a tough spot for all of them to be in. Can't wait for more!

Wow this was a great chapter. Very happy that Johnny got some even if he was kind of a douche to send bailey that text message. And I died laughing for a good few minutes with the Zacky & Brea encounter in the kitchen, that was just brilliant! Very excited to see what happens in the next chapter! :)

I have to say that was a dick move to send to bailey about the text and everything she has moved on and it's just gonna piss her off. i hope things with brea and johnny work out because he needs to leave bailey alone....right now i'm team matt for shari because zack is being a dick

@ gatesguardian.
But of course!

@ Synful Cocktail
hahaha. i mean... i had to insert myself in there somewhere.

I'm happy Johnny's found someone! Though it's a little shifty that her name is Brea. Like, coincidence? I think not. I'm glad they're gonna take it slow, it only proves that Johnny's matured somewhat, which I'm pleased about. Hahahaha Zacky, I always knew he was a perv. XD

I'm team Matt all the way!

Dear God the tension and angst of this chaoter! I feel horrible for Shari but at least she's being open to Matt and telling him what she wants even if she's just making it wirk because she can't have Zack. Who is a total dumb ass but you can't blame him for thinking he's doing the right thing. I'm super excited for the next chapter, hopefully Shari can pull it together.

Poor Shari, I feel so bad for her because all she wants is what Bailey has with Brian. Matt and Zack need to figure out what they want and I hope someone tells matt about the baby before she can't hide it

@ InfiniteLove @ Synful Cocktail
matty will find out soon enough. ;)

I can really connect with Shari as strange as it sounds, I don't know if I love Matt or Zacky more. I don't even know if Zacky could be forgiven so easily after giving her hope then ripping her heart out repeatedly. I don't blame Shari for breaking down almost all the time. Baileys being inconsiderate what happened to the compassionate Bailey two chapters ago? Even though she doesn't know who the father is, she sure as hell got her man no matter what.. And she can't hide her baby bump from Matt for too long!

Wow, Matt. You sure do surprise me sometimes. Holy fucking shit, I hope he's been genuine. Him and Shari would work.

I agree, Bailey should tell Matt. Like now.

I.........am still team Zacky and Shari. I mean, sure, Matt is showing that he's the mature one and showing that he has what it takes to step it up and be the "husband/father" figure... some of his comments had me second-guessing his intentions. I have no doubts that he loves Shari, but his comments of wanting her without the title, then how he's being an asshole about Zacky...in the words of one of my favorite Seether songs, words are weapons of the terrified. How easy is it for him to say everything she needs to hear? As terrible as that sounds...

Gah I get way into this stuff! But this remains one of my favorite stories, I can't help but get submerged in the plot. It absolutely made my morning when I saw that you updated. I could be completely wrong about Matt. That sex scene was very hot. "You should taste like me." That's perfect! Haha But also, Shari's line of "pretending everything was fine." Not something you should be feeling if you're with the person you want to be with. :(

I eagerly await your next update! Sorry for being that commenter again. :3

@ melevolent fiction
now you know how i feel... i'm always like, "i want them together, no them... yes, them! no... THEM!" haha!

OMG I never thought that was going to happen, and then it did and all I can think is omg. From the way Matt is talking I really hope that Shari and Matt get together and stay together, but then again i feel she should be with Zack. Its so frustrating. I loved it though and can't wait for more

I love the emotion within your story it really hits you hard I love it! And what a shift! I dont know who I love Shari with more Zacky or Matt!? Ughh Zack why were you so stupid lol and Matt! Ugh why are you so sweet!? It's killing me! You did a fantastic job as per usual :D