Breaking the Pact of Bat Country - Comments

Ohhhhhh the drama! While I'm not super surprised, I knew Matt just had issues with existing himself the right way, things definitely just got super interesting! Ahhh! So glad to see this updated and very excited to see what happens in the next chapter! If that at all sparks your writer juices lol

Wow. I can definitely say that I was so freaking surprised after I read this chapter earlier this morning. Holy shit. You've managed to completely shock me, which is rare considering I usually have a good idea of direction. (I only just realised that I was a couple of chapters behind. )

Everyone's true colours are showing, and I must say that I like it. After reading, I can now see and understand why Matt acted the way that he did. He didn't know how to deal with his feelings for Shari, and so he took it out on everyone. MATTHEW OH MY GOD. I LOVE YOU AGAIN. I hope it works out for both him and Shari.

Zack surprised me the most. And, I want to slap him. I'm so freakin' pissed off at him. Ugh.

@ StacieIerogeance
gotta start switching things up, you know?
I finally know what direction this story is going in. and that feels good!

Wow that is a changed Matt right there and at least Shari knows if Bailey got pregnant he would hope the guy would step up. Which is a good thing because she is and the guy is stepping up, because I still hope it's brian.

@ melevolent fiction
wow. that is such a compliment. thank you. i am working on the next chapter. i am having a hard time with it for some reason.

srry i didn't mean to submit that lol. When are you updating? i can't wait. This story is the one story that has kept me going. Its one of the best things i have ever read and i can't wait for more.

srry i didn't mean to submit that lol. When are you updating? i can't wait. This story is the one story that has kept me going. Its one of the best things i have ever read and i can't wait for more.

well then

@ InfiniteLove
thank you! i'm sorry i haven't updated recently. i have a lot of work drama going on and classes at the university but i am working on the next chapter.

I love rereading your stories :) I can't wait for updates on any of your stories! :)

damn lol i love it i need more... i can't believe that Zack did that to shari... i think they belong together :(

@ InfiniteLove
this was probably the greatest comment i have gotten in a while. thank you for that.

@ StacieIerogeance
shari some ideas. i mean, she's kind of sick and tired of... everything. of not being first, you know? but things will work out. :) i swears.

@ headrushxreeta
haha, well, thank you! i tried throwing in some surprise. i mean, i can't say that's how things will or won't be... ya dig? lol. but seriously... things are all coming together now. for everyone. but there's still some fight left. in everyone.

Zack is really putting Shari through it... #icant with him right now, he's driving me crazy now lol. I thought his love for her was stronger than that but I guess we were all wrong. I'm very anxious for this next chapter and what is gonna happen now with that. Especially since I'm thinking Matt and Dan are the familiar looking guys at the bar. I can see Shari getting drunk and being with one of them after Zack so brutally rejecting her. Or Matt trying to be with her, her getting mad about him sleeping around and then getting into a fight. But I'm not sure if Shari has any fight in her right now, so I'm definitely anticipating the next chapter. This was a really great update, I can't say I'm surprised about Zack although I definitely wasn't expecting it, glad to see a writer that can throw in the element of surprise! :)

awwwwwwwwwwwww pooor shari...I want to yell at zack and punch him in the face and slap him around a bit....if i was her I would probably try to get back at zack and like OPENLY flirt with matt in front of him like Hmmm see you said you would lose to matt and you pushed me away so ehre i am

I regret rushing to read your updates! I end up finishing it and left with the "what do I do with my life" feeling. The update was amazing! And so heartbreaking! I love Shari and she deserves to be loved. I loved Shari and Zacky together, but I can tell she's going to get herself into some trouble at the bar, with Matt and Dan possibly? Ahhh!!! I can't wait for the next update already, the anticipation kills me after reading your stories! You're an extremely talented writer!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww yay they made up!!! I'm so happy but I stilll hope the babies is brian to FULLY get johnny out of her life.

@ headrushxreeta
awe, thank you for this. it was exactly what i needed. i wanted to post this little chapter before i got to the nitty-gritty. you'll definitely be hearing from matthew soon. :) and zack and shari darma is coming.

Oy, I'm so glad Brian and Bailey got over that little spat. This chapter was just damn cute once they got past the yelling and crying haha. I mean, she walks in the room and Brian is sitting there and he starts singing and playing their song on his acoustic guitar?! And it's Yellow by Coldplay! I think even I choked up a little. And hopefully that particular argument is done, they both know the other loves them, and Johnny is just desperate because he didn't realize what he had with Bailey until she wouldn't be with him at all anymore (silly man). I'm very anxious to see what's going on with everyone else too, Matt's role has been quiet and Zacky and Shari haven't really been having any issues that we've seen. Loved this update and I'm very excited for the next chapter, can't tell you enough how much I love this story! :)