Deadliest Catch. - Comments

I'm not sure if you are active or not, but so far this is really well written! I love how detailed it is and how much it draws me in. I definitely would love to read more if there is an update in the future. This has so much potential and I really want to see what else happens!

You’re really great at describing scenes and making the image in the reader’s mind as to what’s going on in the story. During the concert, I felt the chaos, and in that party, I could definitely understand why Ainsley went into the garden to read. She and Hunter interact in a way that is believable while still cute and funny, and the sisterhood between Ainsley and Celia is also pretty funny and realistic. You should continue with this (if you want, I mean), since it’s a really well-written story! I’m really curious to see what happens, even though I have a feeling that it’s not gonna be all hunky-dory.

I love the lay-out and the edgar allen poe quote. It makes the chapters really easy to read. The concert in chapter one is described very good. Felt like I was back in my emo/punk time where I used to visits shows like this one. I like Hunters character, straight forward and all. Keep this up!

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Hey, is this still active??? Cause it's very well written and the main character &lHunter's personality makes me want to read more about what's going to happen. Very intriguing. D: I'll subscribe either way. ^.^ Looking foward to something and I'll also look and see if you have anything recent. :) Thanks.

And the lady hunter is back! Whoop whoop! Can't wait for more, Twinkey XD

As much as I love this story, the constant revisions are insane. I'm not trying to be rude at all! that's definitely not my intention, but I've been reading variations of the same 2-3 chapters multiple times and it's quite tedious.

Awesome story!! Love it so far :)
Haha I'm extremely obsessed with love stories.
But seriously! You are a great writer and the plot is ah-may-zing. More!! ♥

This sounds really good, I’m looking forward to reading more in the future!! I hope you do continue it :) of what I’ve read so far, I really like the way your write.
And the layout is really nice – its really clear and easy to read.

UPDATE!!!

I love this story but it honestly is becoming annoying that every time I receive an update, it's just informing me that you are redoing the story yet again.

Although, I do appreciate you trying to make this story the best it can be and I'll stick with it because I know that it will be amazing :)

Lady Hunter 2.0 should be interesting. P.S. I adore you too ;P

I just love this story ever so much!!! Drunk Ainsley is great and so was Eliza.

Oh dear, dear little Ainsley...
Hunter; I am quite intrigued by him!
update again

Is it bad that I think Ainsley should be drunk more often? She's hilarious.

I just love this story ever so much!!! Drunk Ainsley is great and so was Eliza.

Twinkey!! I loved this chapter, you know why?? Cuz NOAH made an appearance, omg the love of my life. Haha just kidding. Oh and this was funny: “Hunter, I’d like for you to meet your hand. It will help you for next few… years.” Lolol that is great oh god. I can't wait to see what hunter the lady hunter will do next ;))) much love <3

i love your dialogue between the two characters and how they interact (its kinda like a push/pull relationship). you know who your characters are and you describe them well to your audience. I'm intrigued to see how far you take this :)

Loved the way you described the show. Having been to many shows like this I know what its like. The pushed, incoherent shouting, flying beer bottles. It would have been nice if you mentioned someone flying overhead while crow surfing, I always felt someone was going to land on me at any second. I also like the difference between the two sisters, how they dress, talk, act, everything. Good job on individualizing them.

With a romance of opposites, you risk being predictable. You seem to know your characters very well though, and your writing is very good, so you're off to a good start. I liked both of your main characters from the very beginning. Their dialogue flows very well and their interactions are interesting.