Molly Was a Good Girl - Comments

Ahh, this is good. haha.

I really like this story!
It sounds really promising.
I can't wait to read more!

I wish I had a man to hold me like Dury.
Dury is cool, I hope he kills them.

You are so good at getting emotions across your description as Molly walked up the steps was real.

Only slightly negative comment; I'd like to see more!!

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HOORAY DURY!!!!
xoxoxo

Oh dear she's in a bit of a mess :(

At least shes got Dury to look after her.

loved the update
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Loved the update

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ooooh

Marcus could do with getting a kick in the teeth! GRR!

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this is brilliant, you're so great. I love the way it's so... enlgish. And so LUDLOW! I know so many people like the ones in the story :P

Poor Molly, that so evil, I'm all angry now. grrrr

You are an AMAZING writer, update soon :)
gracex

Bitches+Batard.
Gah, 'Happy Raping'?
These evil youths never cease to create more havoc!
Poor Molly.
If she walked in sobbing her eyes out her brothers would probably go find and beat the shit out of Marcus and his girlfriends.

that's such a sad update :(

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I feel so sad for molly D:
update now!

Dury is the best

Oh no! Poor Molly...

I can't wait to know what happen now, update soon please :)

You are an amazing writer by the way.

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Ooof, msi songfics :]]

Love it, *subscribes*

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Ooooh! What's gonna happen???
Ha! My name's Molly. Parts of me are just like the fictional one! XD
And I love the MSI song.
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*subscribes*

i love it

Molly sounds like the kind of girl my Mum would like me to be...

This story is so amazing!!!!!

You're an amazing writer, totally amazing!!!

And Dury sounds like a sweetheart~

Like i told you on msn, I love this. i love your style of writing.
your style is great, its really down to earth and realistic yet captivating. I love Molly and dury already, and anna sounds like the sort of girl i flip off.

"learning how to be a good housewife"
-Um. EW.
-_-

I love this!
it's brilliant!!!

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*squeegle*

This is amazing!!!

Wow, when I look at my other comment I sound like such a critic!!! I only sounded like that cause my older brother was breathing down my neck and I had to type something fast~

But this is so great!!!!!! I totally dig Dury! Cute name, too!

Love it, love it, love it. And I love hows she's the only girl and her football team brothers and all tha good stuff~

It's so grand.

Wow, I liked that update.
:cute:
Molly seems to be, well, sure, a good girl, but she's smart and has a bit of an attitude. Not in a bad way.
I like Dury :)