We Lit Up Like Fireworks - Comments

this was sooo adorable and cute.. i loved it!!!

Ah, I forgot how absolutely adorable this story is. Love it so much <3

AHHHHH THIS was so cute :3

holy moly, i just realised i hadn't commented on this story when it ended! dont even know why...
i loved it so much! they're so cute together i wanted it to last forever :) and yes, i am going to imagine many happy things for them in their future :)
thank you for writing this story, i loved reading it!

I love this story. It's very cute.

This story is so cute.

Noooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!! How is this story over? D': it's so cute:) I love this story :) I'm just sad it's over >.<

I loved this story and I really enjoyed reading it. It was so adorable! Miles was especially adorable. Great job.

That was THE cutest ending ever.
I totally loved this story. It was amazing.
Definitely sad it must end, but all great things must come to an end I guess. :)

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. I love it.

The ending was absolutely perfect. Miles is the coolest kid ever. I repeat, toddler genius.

Oh, and I actually started singing the Wicked Witch is dead song from the Wizard of Oz when Jay kicked the girlfriend out.

Kenzie is adorable, too. Just sayin'.

I'm not a very big commenter, but just, ohmygoodness! This story was so adorable and not too unrealistic! They didn't get together right away and that made me sad, but happy! Just, ahhhhhhhhh. I want more, but it's just so great as it is.
And Miles, just hah xD He's too great. I just love your characters and your writing. Please continue your amazing work! :) <3<3<3

Perfect.
Perfect.
Perfect.
I can't believe this is over :c but it was totally worth my time. This is absolutely wonderful.
Thank you for making such perfect, perfect things :')
No words.
<3

This was so perfect, aww.

That chapter literally made me lol. Miles is too cute. I really like this story. Sad it had to come to an end. Update soon!

Ahhhhh!

«"Oooh, daddy used a naughty word!" Miles giggled, before adopting my harsh facial expression, also pointing out the door. "And daddy said get out, so get out!"» MILES IS JUST THE CUTEST THING EVER!! I was cooing all the time :3
And God yes!! The bitch is out of the picture *squeals* fina-fucking-lly! Now up to find Kenzie we go! :D
It made me sad seeing the was Jay was :( Poor thing was so distraught! He really needs Kenzie medicine so the three boys can live happily ever after ^-^
Only one more chapter? D’: You have no idea how much I want this to last. This is so sadly short o.o I love it, though. Please gimme more *-*

awehh </3 kenzie come backkk!~you'll re-unite them right?? RIGHT?? pleasee do!~ >A<update soon!~

Oh noes!! Kenzie!!! Don't go D': Come back right this second!!
This story is so damn beautiful *.* and Miles? oh em gee! that kid is so adorableee :3
Please update soon *-* please, please, please!
I'm completely in love with this :')

Aww, Jay. I love it. 2 chapters? :( I'll live, I know I will, but it's still sad.

ADFGHJKL OMG. SO BEAUTIFULLL. <3 Please update soon!~ I can't wait to see what happens after this 8D <3 they're wayyy too cute xDD