Abbey's Road - Comments

I can't stop crying oh my god. I seriously can't stop crying that was so fucking heartbreaking.

I feel like I've been crying for two days straight. :(

Hey girly! I'm here for the comment swap! This story seems to be pretty neat, tbh. I don't normally read Avenged Sevenfold fics? Not because I don't like them or anything, but because I don't listen to them at all and so I feel a little out of my element. So whenever I read one of these fics, they have to be REALLY awesome and I'm happy to say that your story is probably going to join the handful of Avenged fics I've actually taken the time to read and enjoyed. Where can I even begin?

This story is very easy to follow and makes the reader feel like they're actually there and really experiencing Zacky's emotions and following his trains of thought and so on. I'm very curious about Abbey and what kind of person she is and why she would leave so suddenly and just pick up and... go the way she did. Did she have a falling out with someone? Is it someone from her past? What? I'm genuinely curious and would really like to find out more.

I don't have much to say in terms of critique? I feel like this story is pretty solid and has a lot of potential? My only suggestion would be for your summary, actually. I get that you're trying to summarize your story and that you're trying to catch people's interest, but sometimes less is more and I kind of could already guess what the story was about just from that. But besides that, your story is really amazing and heart wrenching and I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks so much! Your blog should be done soon (:

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I hope to all things holy that he did not find her dead, that would kill him, especially so soon after Jimmy.

Gah, I need to know! XD

OH MY GOD! You can't do that to me! Cliffhanger? Now???? I neeeeed to know what he finds. Update soon!

OH MY GOD! You can't do that to me! Cliffhanger? Now???? I neeeeed to know what he finds. Update soon!

No what the fuck please don't make her be dead and please don't make this end sad ;( and PLEASE UPDATE!

This is so fucking sad!!!

Decide to have a look through your stories and oh my god, I am in tears, you have a serious talent!

First things first, sorry it's taken me so long to get here, a million and one things kept stopping me sitting down and reading properly But a story comment is what I promised, and a story comment you shall get! :D

I really like the banner you used, it's simple and elegant. And I really like that picture of Zacky

Now, onto the story! Those first three lines,

Abbey + Zacky
Best friends forever
06/17/1988

so adorable! I could picture their six and seven year old selves, carving those words into the tree after he rescued her from the bully, so sweet!

Oh no, she left him? That's so sad D: But I suppose, if she felt like her life had no purpose where she was, then maybe she did have to leave. I bet that hurt Zack, to know that even he couldn't make her stay. Poor guy :( I can't even begin to imagine what he's going through, not knowing where she is, or if she's even okay. That would kill me, the not knowing. Good on him or getting out, though. I know he misses her, and he's devastated, but sitting in by himself, won't do him any good. Even if he's just going for the alcohol.

Awww, well at least he's not moping anymore! A road trip, I'm excited! Haha. I think that was a good start to a story I know I'm going to love, already!

A gradual goodbye would be far easier for her beloved than a sudden termination that would leave him scrambling for his emotions and answers that could never be found. Why do I think there is something more to this? My spidey senses are tingling! Haha.

Okay, hospital visit is making me question everything now! If Zack finds out that she's in contact with Jimmy, he's gonna have a bitch fit, but I'm glad that one of them is there for her. Okay, I think I get it now, if my suspicions are confirmed, oh my god, I can see myself bawling my eyes out! Ugh, that guy is such a creep! Why can't some men just take the hint?! I love that she was named after The Beatles, I'm a huge fan! :D Hahaha, I love Jimmy! Oh no, Zack, don't do thinking she doesn't love you! Like a comment below me, I can feel my heart breaking a little bit each chapter that I read. They really are made for each other, it's so sad. I like that you put little flashbacks into each chapter, helps me get to know them, and their relationship. Which is probably also making me sad, cause they're so cute together! The fact that they've been best friends since they were little, grew up together, fell in love. Heartbreakingly beautiful.

Okay, I wasn't expecting that!!! Oh no But I think Zack would have understood, and I think she's not giving him enough credit, I think he'd be able to handle whatever is wrong. He probably would have been upset at first, but he's a strong guy, and he loves her so much, he would have been there for her. But I can understand her reasons, the decision she made.

"Ugh, I squished some kind of bug!" Zacky squealed oh Zack, bless you, adorable!

Man, I don't think Zack could get any more adorable if he tried, that man will be the death of me haha. He's so sweet and cute and argh! Bless him, he's such a girl but in the sweetest way haha.

And this is where I start to cry. Poor Zack, the guy is devastated after finding out that the love of his life had left in the middle of the night, with just a note to tell him. Now he learns that she was pregnant and got rid of it. But still, the drinking won't solve anything! She may have thought they weren't ready, and maybe she wasn't, but how could she know for sure that Zack wasn't? I really think that had she sat him down and explained everything, he would have understood. He may have gotten pissed at first, but I think he loved her enough to at least talk about it. But then again, you wouldn't have much of a story if she's stayed, haha. Le sigh, poor babies! Of course Jimmy was gonna tell him, though.

Oh my god, he was so close!!!! Man, that sucks. But of course he would still think about her, he's madly in love with her, despite her thoughts otherwise. I'm on chapter 6 now, and I have this foreboding feeling that this isn't going to end well D: But I cannot stop reading! Haha. I should be writing myself, but I can't tear my eyes away from the screen!

He's just sinking deeper and deeper into depression, and my heart breaks more and more for the both of them. I get that what Matt said was probably a little harsh, but the guy's right. They all know that Zack misses her, cause they do too. They've willingly dragged themselves half way across the country to try and find Abbey, leaving behind their girls and families. Maybe Zack should think about them for a second.

My heart just broke completely. Chapter 9.

Jimmy's right, she's been incredibly selfish. And she will wish that Zack was there in her last moments. I hope she talks to him, makes him understand why she left. I hope she doesn't chicken out again! Oh, what a cliffhanger!

I'm hooked! This is an absolute gem of a story, I love it so much! Thank you for picking this one for me to comment on! The plot is so unique, interesting, I've never read anything like it on here. Not to mention, it's written so well, you have a talent, my dear! Your description, the way you use words, brilliant! It flows so well!

And I hope you know, there are waterfalls bursting out of my eyes right now! XD

Wow, long comment is long! Sorry if it seems disjointed and a bit messy, I kinda commented as I read. Haha. I'll leave it there before I break the comment box haha

I loved that chapter so much :( I was hoping she'd run int Zacky. But I just wish you'd update a bit more often :(

Love love love this! You write so well. I swear, my heart breaks a little more with every chapter, because it's so real. (Obviously, Jimmy passing on really happened, but I mean that your descriptions are so vivid, I'm in tears over here.) I like the plot; it's really original. And I fully appreciate that her name is due to The Beatles album Abbey Road. I'm amazed I didn't end up with a Beatles-related name, since my mom is a HUGE fan. Lol. Recommending and subscribing right now!

No. No. No. No.

You cannot leave me at a cliffhanger like that. It's not even fair. I came here on comment swap but then I got so caught up in reading that I forgot what I was actually here for. Pleeeeease update right now!

As for your actual writing, I really liked it. I only found a few errors but for the most part it was all very clean. I like how the reader knows that Abbey has a disease and it's probably terminal but you don't tell which kind of disease.

I'm not even in the Avenged Sevenfold fandom and I love this. Please, please, please update soon! I love this so much!

comment swap.
I really did like what I read, I enjoyed the first two chapters thoroughly. Your descriptions are quite good and paint a clear picture of what you're trying to describe. The characters are believable which is really important. There's not spelling or grammar mistakes or anything like that which made this very easy and enjoyable to read. Also the layout is really nice and doesn't interfere with anything. Good work :)

That brought back painful memories of when I found out jimmy was dead :/

Well I'm a massive fan of Zacky stories, and this is easily one of the best I've read. Your plot is just so original. Plus I hate to say something that has already been said by another reader, but the way you've made it so bittersweet adds an element of almost anxiousness for me when I'm reading this, it's like I don't want something bad to happen, so I'm scared to read the next chapter, if that makes any sense to you. I noticed a few minor typos, like you said they met in the swing set, would it not be better as ''on'' the swing set? Anyway, that doesn't take anything away from the story, so not to worry. Your conversations between characters are so realistic, a lot of people make them sound forced and fake, but you've gotten it just right. You descriptions are wonderful too, they paint the picture of that you're trying to say perfectly. Well done!

I'm dying to know what the hell is wrong with her!!! & it's so sad what happened to her sister!!! I hope you update soon!

This story is unlike anything I've ever read before, it's so bittersweet, and while you know whats happening, there's so much left unsaid. I just want to know what's wrong with her, what kind of disease she has, I've literally been trying to piece it together since I started reading this. The plot is so original, and while there are a few minor typos, the writing and grammar is nearly flawless. I honestly have only good to say about this story, and I would really love nothing more than for you to update frequently. I don't care what anyone else says, this story is breathtaking.

This is amazing! I've never read anything like this before in here - following a list of different places to find someone. And your writing is flawless, with all the detail and descriptions.
I really can't wait for Zacky to finally find her. It's killing me reading all of his suffering. And I also want to know what disease Abbey's got.
I really love this, and I can't wait to read the next update :D

I like this story. It's completely different from any plot & I like tha a lot! I hope you update soon. I want him to find her!!!