I've read a few chapters, and they we're pretty good. No idea what band this is or anything though lol. Is this still active? Cause I'm wondering why I'd get you as a comment swap. Anyway, I'm getting off track here. The only thing that I'd do is new paragraphs when someone talks, cause it gets really hard to keep up with. It looks like everyone really likes this story too ^.^
*GAAAASP* This is going so great! Though the characters seem a little ooc to me, I think it goes well with the story and I'm impressed. Please, pretty please continue with this story soon. I'd really like to read more of it. :)
(Comment Swap) I see this is a slash? Lol. Well, it's incredibly hard for me to read slash. It makes me smile, but not something I really read. I read the first chapter and it sounds pretty good. I recommend putting separate paragraphs when you have a new person talk though. That's really the only thing I have to say. :) Oh, I also have no idea who this band is.
I can't believe that I missed it when you updated this story D: Ugh, I love how naturally awkward these two act around each other... please please update soon? Pleeeaasseee <3