The Princess of Arkham - Comments

I love the name Andromeda. Its gorgoues which fits the chacter.
You write some amazing stories dollface. :)
Update soon? The layout of course is awesome.
I never normally read joker stories so well done dollface.

Right! I know I have commented on this what is 3 times now and I'm SO sorry! I haven't got the hang of this new website yet! I love this story! It's actually the first one I have recommended since they introduced the feature! I also subscribe and I'll be spamming the crap out of it when I update any of my stories it's just too good not to be seen!
I love Andromeda! She's crazy and gorgeous, what could be more awesome! This story is great though and I hope there will be some kind of love triangle between Bruce and Joker although really I think it's about time Bruce didn't get the girl! :P
Nat! x

I have also subscribed :D

I love batman and I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Ohh I like- first joker story I have read in a long time... I like update soon.

Hey, I really love Andromeda's personality, it's very realistic and almost even sad for some reason. I dunno.. and this story is def. a story you can get hooked on :P And again, very good description.

Oh my gosh, I love the crazy personality of Andromeda. The way you portray her insanity is incredibly realistic. This story seems amazing and I can't wait to continue it. I'm only on chapter one.
<3 I'm glad there's a love story for the Joker.

i like it all, and im not a batman fan of any kind, but this is way cool.

I hate to say it, but I agree with silk.tea.

Although I think the concept you have is brilliant. c: I did noticed several spelling and grammar errors, bu those are easily fixed. The only thing that really kept confusing me was the jump from different characters and then I felt like the plot was back tracking at certain points. It was just a little confusing to me.

Not a huge fan of the layout, the color scheme is obnoxious and hard to read. I'm a huge batman fan so that's a plus and also agreed with Backsplash there are tons of spelling errors and it gets a little hard to comprehend what's going on. Your summary is lacking detail so I would go in and add a lot of detail and description and try to add as much background about Andromeda and The Joker as possible to make the story more realistic.

The lime green font is really hard to read. I just clicked on default layout so I could stand to read it. You may want to put something in your short description so people know what the story is about.

I think Mibba has a spell check option if you don't write your story in a Word Document. You have a lot of spelling errors:

antagonizedas - antagonized as
riccocheted - ricocheted
stright jacket - strightjacket
scittered - skittered

I also don't understand how a spider would crawl in her mouth and she be able to scream...

Work on the detail a little more.

Woah so her and Bruce were like childhood sweethearts? That's awesome although how will they react to each other if they come face to face? Amazing as ever and so well written gotta say this is one of my favorite fan fics :)

Loved the chapter as always lol

NOOOOOOOOOO DON"T KILL HER!!!! Lol I love her character she's just as crazy as the Joker and seems to have some history with Bruce Wayne interesting I'm dying for more!!!!

loved the chapter

AT LAST!!! I couldn't find you story in my subcriptions. nor your comments but here you are!!!

I just found this and I soooooooooooo love it!!! I can't wait for more and I can't wait to see whats in store :D