I know nothing about hockey whatsoever. But that bro's pretty cute and I do enjoy the story line. It was refreshing comment swap brought me here instead of to another fangirl band fan fiction. Good detail, good characters. I can't wait to read more. :)
V. I could not agree anymore, that gif is just so accurate.
and that banner, oh goodness. He's just so, he's so Jon. And I feel sorry for Grant because the chemistry they claim not to have is basically all in their passion with fighting with each other then turning to make-up sex. This is just great so far, and I can't wait to read the next chapter :)
RIGHT IN THE FACE, SAMANTHA! goodness. that was a little harsh from Elena, though! everyone has secrets, even ones that they keep from their best friends (whom they promised not to keep secrets from) PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I feel like it'll turn into a full blown fight sometime or something, haha c:
I agree with bublbabie - I was just going to say the same thing! Elena was pretty harsh.
I am interested as to who was out in the hallway....and also what is up with Jon and Sam. There is a real volitility in they way they relate to each other - or maybe it is better described as passion.
Cant wait to have more of their past unfold so that we can understand what has brought them to this point.
Just found this story - I am interested to find out their full story - and where that kiss is going to lead. Obviously there are a lot of lingering feelings between the two of them!
I don't follow hockey, so I have no idea who anybody is, but you write really well so that doesn't matter! I only read through the first chapter, and I think you did a great job setting the story up. I was pulled in really easily and you were able to keep my attention throughout the whole chapter. Keep up the fantastic reading and good luck with the story!
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaang! I mean not going to lie. Totally love the ending of the chapter, but oh me thinks this could lead to disaster...just saying.
LOL I LOVE HOW ELENA IS NINA DOBREV. TVD.<3 but I'm personally more of a Stefan fan. c; ANYWAYS. oh my gosh this is so cute aksdhflkajsdhlkcjaefk JON MISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSES HER~~ SNAP GIRL. and she knows she misses him to. she just can't admit it. update soon, please? (: