This was very beautiful. I agree with daisyfairy that I also thought it was perhaps a woman writing to her husband or lover during a war. Towards the end it seemed to become the words of a desperate man. It was a very ambiguous and androgynous letter. You were able to bring out several senses in this piece. You were able to use words to create sounds that gave sentiment to the piece. You achieved your objective very well. This creates interest in me to read more of your work as I feel that you have a very strong voice.
September 3rd, 2014 at 11:40pm