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  • xmunch

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    Just got this story through the comment swap. I like that you have mentioned the conflict she has with Ronnie and Craig, I can sense drama! I'm looking forward to seeing her relationship with monte grow also. I just wish there was more back story about them as a couple (:
    The only critism I had was the blue in the layout, it was a little hard to read but not bad. Keep going!
    July 4th, 2012 at 07:59am
  • LastChance.

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    Hey, i just read your story and i have to say i really liked it. It was something fresh and new and i really enjoyed reading it, you have clearly planned every character and chapter and it really shows and gives your story a better flow than making it up on the spot. I really loved it!
    June 9th, 2012 at 09:03pm
  • Synyster Gates;

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    Yay for an update! I lovered it!!! More soon please?!
    May 18th, 2012 at 12:15am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    Loved this update darlin!
    May 2nd, 2012 at 01:12pm
  • angelfr0mmynightmare

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    nice story! :)
    May 2nd, 2012 at 06:46am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    I love this story!!!
    April 30th, 2012 at 02:24am
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