I Lied When I Said I Didn't Love You - Comments

awww so sad

I found it funny when he said he might attack the Priest.
It kind of reminded me of mikezilla :lol:

Aww
That is so sad and yet so sweet please write more.
Are you going to do the thing we discussed?

it took me a while but i finally finished reading the whole story. its good and i like it. ok i lied I LOVE IT. its really good and i cant wait to read more.

YAY update!!!! = D
I love this story!!!!!!!
altough
I still feel bad 4 Mike = (

Awww, huzzah! An update and a dedication! Things can’t get much better than that! :XD

Wow-zers.

That update was awesome, I’m truly honoured and you really do have a wonderful talent for words.

You have the capability to somehow write mind-blowing descriptions perfectly. And oh God, the metaphors are simply… well, fantastic. For example:

“Tre fidgeted in his seat, acting like a dog with really bad worms.”

Who would come up with a thing like that? You. That’s who. :D Okay, so it was a little grotesque but it sure as Hell was funny and damn straight original. I can imagine Tré sitting and fidgeting like that. The metaphor fit in perfectly.

There was a bit of everything in this chapter and it worked brilliantly.

Such as the humour:
“He’s going to crack,” he mouthed silently, gesturing delicately at Tre.
He was right. Tre had had enough. He bounced up out of his chair, slamming his fists on the table.
“OH MY FUCKING GOD! CAN YOU GUYS BE ANY MORE CHILDISH? JUST FREAKING SAY SOMETHING TO EACH OTHER! ANYTHING! GAH! FUCK! I’m going to watch some TV…”

Oh man, that made me laugh. Out Loud. It was just how Mike and Billie found Tré’s outburst predictable and then a second later it happened. That was genius. Sheer genius.

Then there was a touching part. For some reason, this was the part that made me feel so sorry for Mike:
“I went very still at the sink, my head bowed. Ah. He’d brought it up again. It. The one thing in the universe I found hardest to talk about.”

I just literally felt my heart drop at that part. He seemed so happy for a while but it was short-lived, almost as though he were brought back to reality. The way you had described it as “the on thing in the universe…” that he found the hardest to talk about really made me (as a reader) feel how much it bothered Mike, to know that he could discuss anything other than that.

Overall, it was a marvellous chapter and I’m genuinely chuffed that I got a dedication for a part of his wonderful story. :tehe:

Thank you so much,
Lucie
xxxxxxx

Yayness!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU UPDATED!
I love this story and miss it so.
Please keep writing.
Your bestest froind.
Groose.

awww...it's so sad...poor mike! :-) x

Aww, this was an awesome update. Seriously, it was. :D

I don't really know what to say because everything was just brilliant, spot on:
- The descriptions of everything
- The time "skip"
- The explanation of Mike's thoughts
- Billie's reaction

...I loved everything about this chapter.

I dunno how you do it, but you just seem to make Mike so real. I mean, of course he is real :roll: but...gah! Do you know what I mean? Its just as though the reader "is" Mike...i'm rambling now to make up for the fact that I can't put my thoughts into words.

It was amazing and quickly becomingone of my favouritestories story on here.



xxx

Omg, i love this story!
I feel so bad for Mike!!!!!!!!!!
Cant wait 4 next update!
How could they leave Mike like that!

oh my god. this story just keeps getting better.

no they cant leave Mike behind that is just cruel
and who would he stay with?

brilliant

:shock:

That was...amah-zing. (Again)

I actually do love this story to bits.

I don't know if i've said this already or not, but there aren't many Mike stories out there. In my opinion, this one makes up for that fact entirely.

You really are a brilliant writer.

xxx

I like it!
I cry at the drop of a hat
and its like somone demolished a hat shop

Awesome story!!!!!!!!!!
I cant wait 4 the next update!
I must know what happens!

It's brilliant but does mikey still have to be bulimic
*pouts* Bulimic leads to being anorexic and anorexic
leads to *shudders* paris hilton.

I love the story!!!!!
Poor Mike!!!!

this is an amazing story.

:shock: Oh noes! >.<

That was an amazing update, really awesome, honestly. You're an amazing writer and please, update soon :)