I'd really like to see more dialogue between Rusty and Dalton soon, I want to know more about them and their pasts. Other than that, proceed as planned. (:
Very good job lil sis. I really like how you worked your love of country music into this story. Plus I know that Rusty kinda is a reflextion of you, since you want a cowboy too (a rodeo cowboy would be even better LOL). Keep up the good work, let you imagination just flow freely. I love you.
It definitely has a new air to it, and I find that I do indeed like how Rusty tries to be tough but she does let her walls down at times. It was amazing the other way and it is even better this way. I applaud you and cannot wait for the next chapter! (:
I can not say this enough, but I'll try. I love this story so much. Rusty is lovable yet she has that edge to her that makes me want to hit her. ;) And Dalton, oh he sounds so dreamy! A tip: Don't worry so much about how often you upload, and focus more so on the length and content of the chapters. I don't really mind if I get a chapter a week or just a chapter a month as long as you continue doing what you do best. (: