Ahhh, I'm in love with this story. I'm not good with saying the "I love how-s" or whatever, so I'll just say I'm totally attached to this ahahha. Keep writing! You're amazing. c:
I really like how they haven't just jumped into a relationship yet. I like their friendship. It's sweet. I'm glad you updated so quickly. I can't wait for more! :)
Also, I love that picture. I used to have a dog just like Baz mamed Max. Unfortunately, he passed away a few years ago. But that dog and that picture is adorable. Yay! :D
I don't mean to sound like a jerk but you misspelled Poe's name. It's Edgar Allan Poe. With an "a" in Allan. (You spelled it "Allen," with an "e" inside it). Otherwise, nifty story. Can't wait to see where you take it.